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Rust


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obbster

 Genre: Rock
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A song I wrote today. Was done fairly quickly. Slightly different from the stuff i've been doing lately.
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Lyrics
I try to breathe
But the air has turned to dust
I try to see
But my eyes have started to rust

I scratch your name
Into the flesh covering my bones
I start to bleed
emptying life
I don't yet know

Ahhhhhhh
Ohhhhhhh

I climb a wall
Gravity always pulls me down
As I hit the ground
I shatter but don't make a sound

I try to breathe
But the air has turned to dust
I try to see
But my eyes begin to rust

Ahhhhhhh
Ohhhhhhh
Begin to Rust...
Song Stats
Hits: 1680
Comments: 7
Fans: 7
Plays: 42
Downloads: 61

Uploaded: Apr 15, 2010 - 01:12:53 PM
Last Updated: Apr 15, 2010 - 01:12:53 PM Last Played: Nov 16, 2017 - 06:27:17 PM
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Hardware:
iMac 21.5" 3.06 Ghz, M-audio keystation
Software:
Logic pro 9, B4 2
Comments
psexnyc said 2780 days ago (April 15th, 2010)
Sounds So Good In My Headphones!
Just too hard to critique! This song is most excellent. And the tonality of your voice just makes me jealous! Sounds so good! And those drums! I really like this post.

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MarkHolbrook said 2780 days ago (April 15th, 2010)
Cool song!
I enjoy the piano work! Vocals are cool too! Nicely done!
Check out my latest song called Corn Whiskey
Henke said 2780 days ago (April 15th, 2010)
Slightly different
is almost always a good direction to take in one's music making, I think. Well done, well sung (as always). Thanks,

/Henke
Check out my latest song called Summer (Promenade) (WIP)
dave_b said 2780 days ago (April 15th, 2010)
Rust
Beautiful vocals here. Lyrics are pretty intense. Drums and bass are well done, reverb drenched minor arpeggios feel right in back of this lyric.
Check out my latest song called Llarions Blues
kassia said 2778 days ago (April 17th, 2010)
really nice
to hear something new from you. this is a great song - moving lyrics, great tune and really really good performance and production. I love the layers of background vocals you put in throughout. Nice keyboard opening and I love the echoing ending with the added strings and bass. That bass is incredible sounding, full and rich. I really really like this - well done.
Check out my latest song called Greensleeves
Gaylen75 said 2774 days ago (April 20th, 2010)
Great song
This is well played and writen.
Kudos
Check out my latest song called Dont Go Now
crissew said 2774 days ago (April 20th, 2010)
Yeah!
This is some high quality stuff. Great harmony work. Your vocals sound strong and well enunciated. Very crystal clear backing track. Very full sounding bass tone. Love this stuff with an almost medieval bent to it. Reminds me stylistically of one of my favorites by you (One Last Time) in that regard. Really really good work here man. You are one of the best singers on MJ for sure and your songwriting rocks. Keep up the good work.
Check out my latest song called Dollar Store Christmas w/ Jerry Rissew
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