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iowa


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tmcfate

 Genre: Acoustic Rock

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iowa holds the things most dear to me
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Lyrics
this frozen fertile land is
so tender, and so complete
you vibrate inside me
I moan I gasp I weep

my skin that was once smooth
my teeth once better
legs that like to run
it makes a difference
that is what I told her
as i was calling

There is a little ol house
on a little ol street
in a little ol town we know
and we stand by the window and watch it snow
there is a bed with a window just above it
i know i know we know

Im in your kitchen
Im in your back room
I turned out all the lights
So I can watch you bloom

im weaving a rug full of everything we know
and im calling

there was One bird chrirping
As I drove out of town
Just a hint of light
If you are western bound

My fingers are dancing
On the thought of you
and the thoughts of you
are shining through

a pillow
and a blanket
and the clothes on the floor
new sheets
our bare feet
the open bathroom door
the kisses became our clock
and the sun that stopped just above the horizon
to watch, yeah to watch


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Uploaded: May 02, 2010 - 10:44:17 PM
Last Updated: Sep 10, 2010 - 12:31:31 AM Last Played: May 07, 2017 - 03:16:25 PM
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Comments
MarkHolbrook said 2763 days ago (May 2nd, 2010)
Very cool
Did you a different guitar tuning? It sounds awesome!
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tmcfate said 2762 days ago (May 3rd, 2010)
well
no different tuning ,just a very dark tone and some minimal hammering. thanks mark
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crissew said 2763 days ago (May 3rd, 2010)
Very Pink Floydesque
sound here along the lines of Mother. Very good production on this. Well balanced and very well done in the vocals. Enjoyed it!
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tmcfate said 2762 days ago (May 3rd, 2010)
thanks
for taking the time and having the interest
Check out my latest song called All The Way Home
michaelkoppenheffer said 2763 days ago (May 3rd, 2010)
once again
Another beautifully spacious tune. Your productions (and songs) are always evocative and interesting to me...
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jiguma said 2762 days ago (May 3rd, 2010)
I like the sound you get
... it is in the same zone as Jim Bouchard here. Clean, spacious music with lots of light and shade. You paint a good picture with your lyrics and vocal presentation.
Really well done!
Neil
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lengold said 2761 days ago (May 5th, 2010)
Wonderful lyrics
and song- as always. You paint a very distinctive picture with your songs which definitely appeals to me.
Cheers
Len

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magnatone said 2760 days ago (May 5th, 2010)
Iowa
Tim - wonderful to have something new from you. i'm SUCH a fan of your music, i love the way your songs come through with such heart. this is terrific - thank you!
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Dead End said 2757 days ago (May 8th, 2010)
Great vibe
Hey, I dig this tune.... Good storytelling and soul.
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Bob6stringer said 2749 days ago (May 16th, 2010)
Sublime, subterranean and a definite DL
Supreme, subterranean looseness; the line aout the kisses-clock merits a "sublime." Thanks for sharing the DL function, and feel free to reply with some secrets of how you apply those fine strings, which add mood enough for a lifetime, rolled-up into these too-short five minutes.
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crissew said 2656 days ago (August 18th, 2010)
Another cool one
A bit too reverb soaked IMO. Other than that, very good songwriting. Great lyrics and good kicking chorus. Nice work!
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Name: tmcfate
Location: cranston ri united states
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