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Dancing In The Smoke


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Loob

 Genre: Pop (mainstream)

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Online collaboration. I'm only singing on this one...
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Lyrics
CREDITS:
Lyrics - Buck Stewart (ZzEeAaLl)
Lead vocals, edit, mix, master - Fred E. Jam (keeper)
Backing vocals, author music, arrangement both lyric & music - Crissie Patient (The Patient)
All insturments, arrangement, mix - Billy Playle (The Funge)


It smoldered and burst into an all consuming fire
Insatiable blaze aflame with desire
Longing, and leaping, and licking at the wind
Never knowing what would happen in the end

Was a cold day in June when you went away
Didn’t see it coming, wore all the wrong clothes that day
Burning flames of love too bright to last
Their fallen grey ashes scattered in the past

No place I wanna go
Bleary eyed and yearning so
Dead and crazy crying
Spinning like a spoke
I’m falling laughing (ha ha ha) twirling
Left dancing in the smoke

Ashes to ashes and dust to dust it seems so cruel
Who knows the reason a fire outruns its fuel
Shadows stalk the mind with haunting dreams
Dim beginnings, self-delusions, end in quiet screams

No place I wanna go
Bleary eyed and yearning so
Dead and crazy crying
Spinning like a spoke
I’m falling laughing (ha ha ha) twirling
Left dancing in the smoke

Sparks fly on the breeze, burn and die in mid air
All is lost in my life an’ there
Is nothin’ left to stoke
I can’t see a future dancing in the smoke

I can’t see a future
Dancing in the smoke

Left dancing

Produced at F-Jam Online Musical Studios
Song Stats
Hits: 1604
Comments: 4
Fans: 2
Plays: 60
Downloads: 51
Votes: 1
Uploaded: May 15, 2010 - 10:27:36 AM
Last Updated: Jul 10, 2016 - 07:21:43 AM Last Played: Jan 17, 2017 - 03:03:14 PM
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Comments
Monkaton said 2686 days ago (May 15th, 2010)
Good Song
Very well recorded and the production is very good as well as the playing. The only suggestion I have is that you watch your pitch when singing.
Check out my latest song called The Chord
Loob said 2686 days ago (May 15th, 2010)
re: pitch
Yeah I could probably do a little better if I had resung it. I had my issues with pitch in places when I had a voice. Unfortunately I lost it to vocal chord cancer, so this is the best I will do on this, but I agree, there is a place or two that I could do better on. Thanks...
Check out my latest song called Dream Hotel
michaeljayklein said 2686 days ago (May 15th, 2010)
Great job!
This sounds perfect "as is" if anybody asked me--thanks for posting!
Check out my latest song called There Ain't Nobody Here but Us Chickens!
ste said 2686 days ago (May 16th, 2010)
i
like your vocal sound on this. good mix. top tune too
Check out my latest song called songbreak
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Name: Freddy
Location: United States
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I have been a drummer since about 1974. I've played in bands, and in the studio, and I write and produce. I have been involved in online collaborations since 1998. ... [see more]

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Pop music is a music genre that developed from the mid-1950s as a softer alternative to rock 'n' roll and later to rock music. It has a focus on commercial recording, often orientated towards a youth market, usually through the medium of relatively s

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