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Another version of "Forgivness" have not got a full band version yet! this is the demo I'm giving the band I still dont know if the rock version is better or this is. decision must be made before August when recording begins in ernest Your help and comments welcome but at the end of the day I guess me and the band will decide
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Uploaded: Jun 13, 2010 - 03:28:19 PM
Last Updated: Jun 13, 2010 - 03:28:19 PM Last Played: Feb 05, 2015 - 06:00:50 PM
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fasteddie said 2715 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
I was
just teaching my daughter how to play lead guitar and chose a song at random. We chose yours. This was a nice surprise. We both thought your song is awesome! Nice melody and nicely sung.

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FlorryMcCarthy said 2638 days ago (August 29th, 2010)
how are your daughters lessons progressing?
I'm delighted you liked my track and found hopefully something to teach your daughter in my basic playing. I dont get on here as much as I should so sorry if I didn't get round to thanking ya for your wonderfull comment. Spreading the musical word to the children is where it is at my son is 5 and the very important (to him) half and wants a drum kit for christmas, His mum will love that/them but what my boy wants he gets. Thanx again all the best till the next adventure
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jdholliday said 2715 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
great track!
love the backer, man I would love to get my voice on something like this! Very well sung too!
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richard13 said 2715 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
For what it's worth, I prefer this version
but, to tell the truth, I've not heard the other. This is quite beautiful. Thanks for the d/l.
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Dadai.2 said 2715 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
I haven't listened to your previous version, but I like this one. A very comfortable vibe with plenty of pro sounds. Kudos and I'm glad I stopped in for this listen.

Jarvoid said 2714 days ago (June 14th, 2010)
'Eyup mate,nice
to hear a post from you again,and it seems like a belter.Great solid melody and riffs,the vocals could do with coming up a little bit more,but it's still a keeper.Somewhere between Roxy Music and T'in Lizzy in style in places.Good job.

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FlorryMcCarthy said 2714 days ago (June 14th, 2010)
Thanks EVERYBODY for all the kind words
This just another demo version to give my band. We hope to start band recordings in early August at the moment I'm just refining the songs and sorting out what we'll record and what I'll keep for another project. Glad ye enjoyed it. All feedback helps with my decesion making process thanks again.
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tempie said 2713 days ago (June 15th, 2010)
man i couldn't decide if i liked the delay
on the guitar, with the percussion all those plinky sounds bouncing around...my first thought was that this is such a solid tune that it would be better more raw, just you and an acoustic. but the more i listened the more i thought you had the right idea, that busy soundbed adds a tension that makes the listener pay more attention to the vocals, and the vocals carry this type of tune so I think it works. also like those reverby backups. from a production standpoint you might want to think about going headfirst into the reverb, just drenching the entire tune with it a la My Morning Jacket...
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FlorryMcCarthy said 2335 days ago (June 28th, 2011)
thanx been very busy with real life etc my little boy is now six and a very important half he caught his first fish
So to cut a long story short I dont get round to posting or chatting on here as often as I'd like so thanx for your kind words and hopefully chat soon
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PaulaMunk said 2710 days ago (June 18th, 2010)
Sounds like
you have a hit. :)
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magnatone said 2690 days ago (July 8th, 2010)
what a great sound with this band! sorry it's taken me so long to listen to something of yours, but i'll be back now that i've found you!
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