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Dismal Days


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richard13

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This song is not what I had intended to post next but, following an unpleasant incident at work last week, I felt compelled to create this and post it quickly before I calmed down ;-)

I don't expect anyone to enjoy it (unless you revel in stuff like this) but you might find something of interest.

The image is by Richard Eason at flickr
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DISMAL DAYS
Lyrics by Richard Miller
June 25-29, 2010


Beware of men with rubber stamps
asking if you'd like to dance!
A honeyed kiss from ruby lips
would drive away this rain,
But stronger fare is needed here
to overcome the pain.

If I had known before I woke
that this was mostly bling and smoke,
that I would have to shuck and jive
just to keep myself alive,
I surely would have foregone birth
and saved myself this hell on earth.

I'd have stayed inside my mother's womb,
full knowing that I'd seal my doom:
That tomb is where I'd rather be
than face your warped reality.
Horses' asses come and go
they're all the same: they run the show.

The more I learn the less I know:
it happens everywhere I go.
If I look up and see you down,
I hope I won't just turn around.
I don't fit in with any crowd:
I can only scream so loud.
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Hits: 2049
Comments: 22
Fans: 17
Plays: 215
Downloads: 63
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Jul 03, 2010 - 08:08:01 AM
Last Updated: Jul 03, 2010 - 08:08:01 AM Last Played: Mar 19, 2017 - 03:42:45 PM
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Comments
davisamerica said 2492 days ago (July 3rd, 2010)
i revel in stuff like this
... indeed i do and sometimes a dark outing is good for you. Richard...wonderful production and sound here. I get it ...... arse holes do not rule the world unless we let them..."I hope i won't just turn around" ... indeed my brother...downloaded
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desakota said 2492 days ago (July 3rd, 2010)
We've all been there...
..but not many of us can capture it quite so evocatively. These sorts of life experiences are what lead to good art...
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hackneybloke said 2492 days ago (July 3rd, 2010)
dismal days
you know what richard...i am having such a fucking shit day today. i just commented on this piece, but having had my last comment disappear into the fucking ether i now copy and save everything i write just in case it happens again. so that's what i did just now...wrote you a long comment...and then right clicked and command a to highlight and save...only for some self-destructive reason i hit command q instead....and of course shut down my browser. if there had been a knife handy i would have gladly severed my carotid artery and shuffled off this mortal coil with the remnants of your tune reverberating through my head. this song is cool....dismally so...depressingly so. if there was a macjam challenge for the most suicide-invoking song...then this would win hands down...no wait - slashed wrists down.
the loop bass at the beginning is so known...but what you do on top of it is wild...and i love your lyrics and the vocal game you're playing.
great track.
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RobLeBanc said 2492 days ago (July 3rd, 2010)
Sigh...
this reminds me a bit of Marvin the depressed robot in Hitchhikers Guide, really a bummer trip! Also, cool as hell!
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chestnut said 2492 days ago (July 3rd, 2010)
Dismal Days
There's plenty of interest here! Thanks for being courageous! I hope work's going much better now.
Ken
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alackbass said 2492 days ago (July 3rd, 2010)
Dismal Days
I don't think enjoy would be the correct word anyway. Sometimes art is not created for the enjoyment of the audience but rather to reflect the feelings of the artist. No, I didn't enjoy it. It's pretty harsh in it's message. But I do like it. And I'm impressed by the quality of your work. When I first heard the upright bass I thought, wow, Richard does jazz. Then you took me to a completely different and unexpected place.
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musichead said 2492 days ago (July 3rd, 2010)
I have...
I have done the same thing . A real bad day at work. Like Lost my job!!
I was very upset. I came up with a song called Thrown away. I felt better after writing and recording that song. I like the string bass. Is that you on guitar? I like the feel of this song.
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sloparts said 2492 days ago (July 3rd, 2010)
Dismal indeed
but then life can be that way sometimes, and this reflects the despair that those days can cause in the human soul. Yes this is dark, but it is a shared emotional reaction to people who are Ass Holes. They are all around us, all the time. Mostly we just ignore them, but for some reason they always end up in a position where they have power over us. That is when they can have the greatest effect on our psyche.
Hate this/Love this all at the same time. What it say hurts, the way you said it is a gift. The comment above about Marvin the depressed robot in Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy adds some comic relief, but only to a point.

Thanks for this Richard, it's daunting and delightful in the same breath.

Ed
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dave_b said 2491 days ago (July 3rd, 2010)
Dismal Days
Yeah, we've all had days like this (or month or years). The lyric expresses the feeling well. Like the bass groove, and picked guitar line.
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Skean said 2491 days ago (July 4th, 2010)
Richard
This fits well to our government, cos they are big as holes. Just thinking of them who have it good and give a shit to the poor, sick, old one's… Nice and dark and the mix is excellent… Cheers
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telo12 said 2490 days ago (July 5th, 2010)
Dismal Days
I'm so sorry I don't understand English 100%,but I think i got the message Sometimes I feel like you ,I mean " I don't fit in any crowd "Please, do scream so loud ,someone closer I'm sure will hear the voice coming from your heart.
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lengold said 2489 days ago (July 5th, 2010)
Well - sometimes good
things come from bad. This is one of those things.
Excellent.
Cheers
Len

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VicDiesel said 2489 days ago (July 5th, 2010)
Lemons, juice....
Not a bad track at all. "Beware of men with rubber stamps". I like.
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rok41 said 2489 days ago (July 5th, 2010)
Geeez....
That's dark! I like it.
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magnatone said 2489 days ago (July 6th, 2010)
Dismal Days
this is just real life, and well reflected - thanks Rich!
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jdholliday said 2486 days ago (July 8th, 2010)
whoa dude!
been there, not a good place to be or stay, pretty amazing job capturing a shit day! very dark but you nailed it! Hope you're feeling better!
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WharmtonRise said 2474 days ago (July 20th, 2010)
OK
Well this sounds great. I love the way the rhythm of the spoken words fits with the whole rhythm of the piece. The disharmony is perfect as are the sfx and that bass line is killer! Really terrific work. I'm sorry about the actual reason for the track.
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drakonis said 2474 days ago (July 20th, 2010)
I'm afraid of heights, no ladder-climbing for me
Nicely affected speech over darkly appropriately repetitive music, really gives this a chilling bite... well done... but I am very sad to hear that this was personally inspired. Perhaps there is some reality-warping you can spin back sometime to avenge the slimy rubber stamper.
Best of luck,
Drakonis
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Warren Smith said 2370 days ago (November 2nd, 2010)
Misery loves expression
Richard the Thirteenth - it sounds so Shakespearean : )

But then, so does this song.

I don't know if there's any way to prevent the assholes from taking over; the best we can do is slow them down now and then.

Misery loves expression - we can all relate to the injustice of on-the-job slights. (That is, assuming you have employment in these dull times.) You express that uneasiness well in this piece. The pointed lyrics fit well into the musical flow. I really like that repetitive two-note flickering guitar in the first half of the song - it is so catchy in its relentless simplicity. I wouldn't mind if it buzzed off into thematic variation later on.

All in all, other than the theme, there's nothing dismal about this piece. Good post.
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crissew said 2369 days ago (November 2nd, 2010)
Great pic
focused on the rain rather than the big picture. Quite appropriate. Evil sounding tune. Pretty darn dark lyrics too! We have all been there !
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guygrooves said 2359 days ago (November 12th, 2010)
True Art Rock!!
Very Cool!!
Peace
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jodyrush said 2332 days ago (December 9th, 2010)
Dark...
I like it!
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