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another collab w/amatuerpro
music: amatuerpro
lyrics/vocals: mybravedesign

very personal track... period
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Lyrics
never thought this could be happening to me
never saw this coming (saw this coming)
it's been crazy for a while…but i got responsibilities
the time is now if i don't grow up then i lose everything

and i don't expect anyone
to understand
i never wanted this
guess i never had a master plan
and i'll take a back seat
let you be happy for a while
but i'll never give this up
it's just another wall to climb

we all need a little comfort
doesn't matter what we've done
feeling this like
it was a shame that you came and went
was never the same again
the island we shared was always on the verge of sinking
falling in the sea

i don't have to know
but you do
and i don't have to go
but you do
but you do

always the one who made this happen
always the one who fucked it up
i can't fix the things that i've done
i can only make it up

i could be a better father
i could be a better son
i could be a perfect partner
then you wouldn't have to run
no you wouldn't have to run
have to run

we all need a little comfort
doesn't matter what we've done
feeling this like
it was a shame that you came and went
was never the same again
the island we shared was always on the verge of sinking
falling in the sea
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Uploaded: Aug 01, 2010 - 01:24:45 PM
Last Updated: Aug 01, 2010 - 01:24:45 PM Last Played: Oct 12, 2016 - 03:03:36 PM
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alackbass said 2610 days ago (August 1st, 2010)
stronger
Another strong pop tune. Really like the instrumental backing. I like the synth bass.

Good vocal. I think it could benefit from some double tracking to thicken the lead vocal. I do like the harmony sections near the end.
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RAVENS said 2610 days ago (August 1st, 2010)
Awesome
I remember hearing this track from Alex. Very happy to hear you working with him again.

You have a great voice, and I do agree with Andrew. Maybe you can double the track to get some fullness on the lead vocal. Nonetheless, great collab!

RAVEN ;-)
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michaeljayklein said 2610 days ago (August 1st, 2010)
Good job...
...agree with the double tracking too. One technique I've used in the past is to make three copies of your track. The first one is without reverb or any effects and panned to the center. The second one is panned to the left and given a little reverb (suit to taste) and the third one is panned to the right and given the same treatment as the second. Fiddle with this combination for a bit and see how it sounds.
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alackbass said 2609 days ago (August 2nd, 2010)
OOooo!
I've done the three track panned center, left, & right. But never tried the leaving the center one dry. I always use the same reverb on all three tracks. That sounds like and interesting approach. But in order to try it I guess I'll have to sing one (SHIT!)

Do you mix the two double tracks lower (less volume) than the center one?

Thanks for the tip Michael.
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RobLeBanc said 2609 days ago (August 2nd, 2010)
Stronger
wow, this is so close to the heart, I can feel the emotion of this,in both lyrics and singing.
Nice piece of music to accompany it all as well. Very well done, I have no suggestions about the vocal tracks because I have problems of my own in that area. But really, if you ask me, the song can stand as is because of the personal nature of it.
Sometimes it's hard to revisit a song, only to clean up some vocals, the rawness of the moment in which it was first sung can be lost maybe, I dont know.
Anyhow, a beautiful tune no matter what you do!
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strangedream said 2592 days ago (August 19th, 2010)
Oh wow
BEAUTIFUL lyrics. Very personal, yes. I love the piano. This is epic. It could just be my craptastic headphones, but it sounds like the vox could use just a touch more reverb, but other than that...this is perfect. My faves: Key change at 1:30 or so and these lyrics:
i could be a better father
i could be a better son
i could be a perfect partner
then you wouldn't have to run
no you wouldn't have to run
have to run

Oh and "I don't have to go but you do."

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