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another with alex... i'm going to pull these down soon when i start mixing them and i'll repost when i'm done....
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standing on the outside looking in
in the corner theres a boy with his head in his hands
asking for forgiveness

could of made made it simple
could never lied cauterized
the wounds before i opened gashes in averted eyes
did it cuz' i loved you cuz' i need you
but i'm sorry now
and when sorry don't cut it gotta cut and run for the bottle now go

hopeless and fearful begging and weak
wrapped up in feelings so tight you can't speak
severe the tie it's better this way
answer question with question with question

shamed oh so shameful
he asks her to stay
but what if he had treated her this way
so much to get past don't know she can't say
these problems we're building weren't built in a day

standing on the outside looking in
in the corner theres a boy with his head in his hands
asking for forgiveness and whatever you do you don't give in
when lessons are learned you can't look back and win

follow them down the footsteps down the hall
breaking the promise he made not to call
writing it down it's so hard he can't speak
when he gets down to the corner theres a note and it reads
i'm gone i'm gone
but she's looking outside

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Uploaded: Aug 29, 2010 - 11:17:40 AM
Last Updated: Aug 29, 2010 - 11:17:40 AM Last Played: Jan 29, 2017 - 12:42:55 PM
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lavalamp said 2641 days ago (August 29th, 2010)
well done
Especially liked it when it was just you and piano at the start. Love your phrasing here. Great words friend.

LL
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mybravedesign said 2641 days ago (August 29th, 2010)
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i'm working on a lot more piano stuff like that right now... thanks for stopping in...
Check out my latest song called good day (to go out tonight) demo 2.0
alackbass said 2641 days ago (August 29th, 2010)
T-pain in knowing
Wow! I wish my "keeper" vocals were 1/10 as good as your scratch vocal.
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mybravedesign said 2641 days ago (August 29th, 2010)
haha...
thanks man... i got through the intro before i decided to just do a scratch track because i was writing another song at the same time...
Check out my latest song called good day (to go out tonight) demo 2.0
VicDiesel said 2641 days ago (August 29th, 2010)
Voice
Ok, you have a really great sounding voice. Now you have to work on being a bit more accurate. Around 0:16 for instance you sing the same phrase 4 times and all 4 times you're hitting some in-between sound that is not any existing note.

I hope the "t-pain" is not a reference to auto tuning. I'd rather see you sing a tad more carefully and be great all by yourself.

Oh, and nice song too.
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PaddyNavinCaryatid said 2640 days ago (August 30th, 2010)
Vocals
.. your voice is great, sure it needs a little work in places but I'd kill for such great tone. I like the immediacy of this tune and your open honest feel. Bravo. Love that piano. Would love to get some of those keyboard chops on my tunes.
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dave_b said 2640 days ago (August 30th, 2010)
T-pain in knowing
Nice imagery in the lyric, and the hip-hop style vocal phrasing works well against the backer.
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