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Pathetic and Poetic (remix) w/ scaustrita


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abfkingsport

 Genre: Art Rock

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I love working with Steve, he is such a great musician and song writer. I've always wanted to redo this song, in particular, because it is one of my personal favorites. When Steve sent me the new music track I was so excited to hear it and couldn't wait to jump on it and do it again. I redid my vocals and the guitar leads and the higher key piano notes and added some sound FX to it at the beginning, middle and end. I told Steve I thought some Cello would sound good in the middle when it slows but when he sent me the solo it was so hot I had to extend the song so I could spotlight it. My ideal for the song was about the fact that once our hearts get going, emotionally, we sometimes drive ourselves into a painful situation that there seems no escape because the heart wants, what the heart wants. Watch the mpeg when you listen, it's kind of cool and I thought fit perfectly. A heart factory pumping hearts out. Hope you like this latest version. I know I am certainly happy with it, more so, than before.

From Steve:

When I first heard P&P for the first time in its raw form, I was blown away by its power and its Floydish feel!
I pulled out the MIDI drum kit and started playing along. I knew this tune was hot, so I laid down some tracks
sent them to Anthony and the project was on again! Like always it is a musical pleasure working with Anthony.
He has a wonderful talent for writing hits. Thanks again A.
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Lyrics
Pathetic and Poetic

It’s pathetic and poetic
My heart is the machine
That drives for love
To no end

Sympathy, apathy, what do you get from me
Pain and the passion
There’s no frame for this kind of action

Berate me then hate me
You love me then loath me
It’s all been the same to me
At the end

Take me, don’t break me
Forsake me, don’t rape me
Oh why don’t you just
Let me be

You kick me you bite me we fight me
Maybe we should just try to turn off the machine

The machine drives (repeat)

Why you don’t you let me be
Why won’t you set me free?
If not just out of sympathy

My heart is just the machine
That drives me to the extreme
And there is no end again


The machine drives (repeat)
Song Stats
Hits: 1792
Comments: 11
Fans: 7
Plays: 83
Downloads: 56
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Sep 02, 2010 - 07:39:22 PM
Last Updated: Sep 02, 2010 - 07:48:52 PM Last Played: Nov 05, 2016 - 10:04:51 PM
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abfkingsport said 2426 days ago (September 2nd, 2010)
The King
For some reason the mpeg pic is not moving. Sorry, I thought it was pretty cool. I guess I'll have to find another good representation of the song.
The King
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crissew said 2385 days ago (October 14th, 2010)
You can upload it to youtube and embed it in the description here.
That would work. That is what ShadowofNine does and it works great.
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alackbass said 2426 days ago (September 2nd, 2010)
Pathetic and Poetic
Dark like Floyd at their bleakest. The distorted rhythm guitars are right out of The Wall. Love the vocal. Downloaded!
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sschedra said 2425 days ago (September 3rd, 2010)
Terrific!
Yes very heavy Floydish feel. Its great you guys can produce stuff like this. Very well done. And you got the cello in anyway (LOL).
Check out my latest song called Cheap Tricks (LSP2)
fasteddie said 2425 days ago (September 4th, 2010)
I almost missed this one
That would have been a huge shame.

Powerful vocals man!

Great music backer as well.

Killer!
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Outtaorbit said 2424 days ago (September 4th, 2010)
huff more
Lol
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Outtaorbit said 2424 days ago (September 4th, 2010)
This is what I'm beginning to hear
Put it out there .. rock it.... and this rocks.... nicely done
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richard13 said 2423 days ago (September 6th, 2010)
Heavy duty guys
Nice work from both of you: a great collab.
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CraizeeMusic said 2385 days ago (October 14th, 2010)
Great Stuff!!!
Wonderful stuff, to the both of you! The song and artistry captures the mood and meaning of the song very well. Wonderful composition and variety. Great Job!
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crissew said 2385 days ago (October 14th, 2010)
Somehow I missed this
Once in a while, one gets by me! This is a great remix, sounds powerful. Love the multiple overdubs on your voice, lends a lot of power to the chorus. At 4:30 would have liked the song to step up in energy, it kind of takes a step back though with the synth part coming in. One of your best songs, both of your. Great work here!
Check out my latest song called Dollar Store Christmas w/ Jerry Rissew
Soundhound said 2215 days ago (April 1st, 2011)
Nice to hear....
Some Music by Steve a real good Friend and player...

Nicely done by you both....
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Name: Anthony Frazier
Location: Kingsport Tennessee United States
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Art rock is a sub-genre of rock music that is characterized by ambitious lyrical themes and melodic or rhythmic experimentation, often extending beyond standard pop song forms and toward influences in jazz, classical, or the avant-garde. The art rock

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