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The Approaching Wolves


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rjspark1980

 Genre: Ambient
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This is my 3rd project since I started working with GarageBand... Tell me what you think.
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Hits: 1435
Comments: 8
Fans: 3
Plays: 46
Downloads: 46
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Oct 24, 2010 - 09:54:09 PM
Last Updated: Oct 24, 2010 - 09:54:09 PM Last Played: May 12, 2016 - 02:41:55 PM
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just GarageBand software instruments
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Char said 2407 days ago (October 24th, 2010)
It sounds like
a combination of hip hop and dance music. Neat organ. Thanks.
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Outtaorbit said 2407 days ago (October 24th, 2010)
This is good
Curious now where your gonna soften this up
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davajonah said 2407 days ago (October 25th, 2010)
Cool!
I love the minimalism of this piece. Not really ambient as such, but we don't have an "electronica" genre here, do we? [a gripe of mine]

Nice piece of work sir.
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drakonis said 2407 days ago (October 25th, 2010)
IDMElectrogasm
Intriguing mix of sounds carefully placed through a nice electro sound bed. Very cool, you and "Diviner" here will get along nicely I bet :-)
ttfn,
Drakonis
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jdholliday said 2407 days ago (October 25th, 2010)
I think you need a pic!
hah! just teasing! This is fun! Gb is like getting a new toy heh?
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Stun Nutz said 2407 days ago (October 25th, 2010)
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That second half with the warm organ and piano really makes the piece. This could work as a longer piece with more variations on that section.

The beat intro, to me, needed something else to it... or perhaps something different. The simplicity is good, but it was maybe a little too ordinary sounding.
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Stun Nutz said 2407 days ago (October 25th, 2010)
About the intro...
... if you played around with shifting some of the synth and other elements to the off beat, or slightly off-beat, it might give some added funkiness...
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rjspark1980 said 2407 days ago (October 25th, 2010)
i totally agree
i also felt like the intro was lacking... but somehow it led me to the 2nd half of the song that i love, and i couldn't figure out how to change it other than completely omitting it.. also i was pretty excited to upload it. thank you so much for the honest feedback.. maybe i'll go back in and change some stuff and upload a revised version.
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Name: Ron Remsberg Jr
Location: New Smyrna Beach Florida United States
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Just started using GarageBand this year (2010)... Lets see what happens.... [see more]

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Ambient music is a loosely defined musical genre that incorporates elements of a number of different styles - including jazz, electronic music, new age, rock and roll, modern classical music, reggae, traditional, world and even noise.

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