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kaishin

 Genre: Acoustic Rock
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very rough demo, not sure whether to do more
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Uploaded: Dec 04, 2010 - 05:36:53 AM
Last Updated: Dec 04, 2010 - 05:36:53 AM Last Played: Mar 21, 2017 - 03:18:43 PM
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Hickling_Stan said 2302 days ago (December 4th, 2010)
Firsties!
Interesting arrangement and a haunting vocal. Although i can see where you are going with this I'd personaly pull back the reverb just a bit. Feels like its crying out foe some drums to come crashing in part way through as well. Cheers mark
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ted23 said 2302 days ago (December 4th, 2010)
Do more
Do more do more.
This is good But could excellent with a bit of polish.
Great vocal
magnatone said 2302 days ago (December 4th, 2010)
to her
do more!!! this has everything needed for a great song - you've gotten some good ideas already from Stan and Ed - i'm really strictly an instrumentalist/orchestrator so i can only say, keep GOING with this (without knowing precisely what to suggest). your vocals are really good!
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tempie said 2297 days ago (December 9th, 2010)
yeah, i agree, do more
i really like the dynamics. and you've got quite a voice. I like the arrangement and the instrumentation you use here, i don't know that i'd add any more to it, i think it mostly just needs production work. there's too much space between the guitar and the vocals in this version in my opinion. But really, really like the tune.
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kaishin said 2289 days ago (December 18th, 2010)
Thanks
for the feedbacks and tips, i'll re record it in the next week or so, i put lots of reverb on cos the microphone i was using was rubbish but hopefully i can borrow a decent one and maybe add some drums. ta
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Name: michael o'brien
Location: Shanghai Shanghai China
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been working and playing in a band in Taiwan for the past few years, in Shanghai now, will be looking to play live soon... [see more]

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