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Please Come Back To Stay


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PeterB7858

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Another song that sprang out of a chord progression. I started mumbling words and this evolved. Hope you like it. Regards, Peter.
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Lyrics
Please come back to stay – Peter Bowen (2008)

Birds sit on my awning, they sing and dance and play
But they’re waiting for a warning, alert to fly away

And me, I’m down here grounded; I know I can’t take flight
I’m feeling kind of empty
But I know…. one call from you…. would make it right

My heart it takes a quick turn
Each time the phone bell rings
I pray that it’s you calling
Hold my breath, a reflex thing
I’ve rehearsed our conversation
Each word, just what to say
I’m begging, please be home by Christmas
Please… come back to stay

The kids and I are OK
We carved a rough routine
They are getting so much older
It’s hard to think just where they’ve been
I’m sure they’d welcome you back
They miss you in the night
I can see it in their faces
A call from you… could make it right

So hear me through the airwaves
Is it so hard to backtrack?
I need you by my side here
We want our family back
I hope that all your wandering
Has eased your worried mind
I’m begging, please be home by Christmas
We’re what you set out to find

I hope that all your wandering
Has eased your worried mind
Darling, please be home by Christmas
We’re what you set out to find
Song Stats
Hits: 3756
Comments: 76
Fans: 29
Plays: 136
Downloads: 77
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Dec 13, 2010 - 08:29:50 AM
Last Updated: Dec 13, 2010 - 08:31:38 AM Last Played: Mar 18, 2017 - 01:33:36 PM
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Hardware:
AKG Perception 129, PreSonus Audiobox, Macbook, Maton acoustic
Software:
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Comments
KCsGROOVE said 2415 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
sweet music
Man, you got a perfect voice! :-)
Love the fingerpicking here
Good song!
KC
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PeterB7858 said 2414 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
New AKG to the fore
Hey KC, thanks for the encouragement re the vocals. This is the first song I have recorded with my new AKG mike and PreSonus interface and they do a MUCH better job than my old setup. I appreciate you dropping by. Regards, Peter.
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Loob said 2415 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
Nicely done!
I'm enjoying this Peter!
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PeterB7858 said 2414 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
Thanks
Thanks for the comment and fav Loob. I appreciate you taking time to have a listen. Take care, Peter
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jdholliday said 2414 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
wow Peter!
you're really sounding great here friend, and isn't it amazing how when you write a song you just start mumbling and something great like this comes out, man I love that when that happens! Great song, excellent playing, and your production skills are growing in leaps and bounds, this is one of the best songs I've heard here and there are some great songs here, very well done sir!
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PeterB7858 said 2414 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
You are too kind sir...
Hey JD, Thanks for the BIG compliment. I wrote this song a while ago but only recorded it properly yesterday. My new AKG mike and interface make a difference. No effects on the acoustics at all. I appreciate your support of my music. Warm regards, Peter.
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jiguma said 2414 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
Nice one Peter
Great mix (I'd perhaps bring both the guitars in to the centre just a fraction). Good vocals and great picking.
Neil
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PeterB7858 said 2414 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
Appreciate it
Hi Neil. Thanks for having a listen and commenting favourably. I really appreciate your input. I will move the guitars in a bit and have a listen. Regards, Peter
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Rayelise said 2414 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
Please come back to stay
The sensitivity of this drew me in.... felt both in the singing and the guitar. Thanks for sharing. Lots of great songs were born from chord progressions and some mumbling, haha. I also like the drawing! So sad!
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PeterB7858 said 2414 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
Mumbling along :-)
Hi Rayelise. Thanks for listening to my song and taking the time to make a comment. Yes, I have to admit I write quite a few of my songs by playing a chord progression and seeing what words tumble out. This usually gives me a main theme that I then will write to. I appreciate your positive feedback. Warm regards, Peter.
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alackbass said 2414 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
Please Come Back To Stay
Holy shit you're good! The interplay between the guitar tracks is great. And I wish I could sing like you. Downloaded!
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PeterB7858 said 2414 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
Supportive
Thanks Andrew. Appreciate your positive feedback. Thanks for supporting my music. Warm regards, Peter
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johnwhitehead said 2414 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
Come Back
I dig this a lot. Classic folk/pop sound. Simple but so effective. Nice guitar work and spot on vocal. Great bit 'o writing.

One crit: might be a bit long for existing melody ideas. You might consider cutting a verse. Or write a bridge (melodic left turn) using last section of lyrics and insert between second and third verses. Just a thought.


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PeterB7858 said 2414 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
Thanks for the constructive feedback
Hi John, Thanks for dropping by and having a listen. I agree with you re the crit. I struggled to add variety to the verses because of the length of the song. I will think about a bridge. Regards, Peter.
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tempie said 2414 days ago (December 14th, 2010)
great vibe
hold my breath-a reflex thing. great line. really enjoy your voice, it has a great 70's folk rock sound, makes me feel like chilling on the porch on a summer sunday, great vibe. thanks for the DL
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PeterB7858 said 2414 days ago (December 14th, 2010)
Living in the 70's
Hi Craig. Yeah, I liked that line as well. Thanks for the compliment re my vocals. I am getting a bit more comfortable hearing them but it's still a bit weird. Living in the 70's - that's me! I still listen to lots of music from way back then. Thanks for taking the time to have a listen and comment. Take care, Peter,
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dave_b said 2413 days ago (December 14th, 2010)
Please Come Back To Stay
Really nice vocs and picking. Lyrics sound heartfelt.
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PeterB7858 said 2413 days ago (December 14th, 2010)
Lyrics that write themselves...
Hi Dave. Thanks for dropping by and posting an encouraging comment. I have never actually been through the situation described in the lyrics (thank god) but they seemed to almost write themselves when I developed the song. Go figure! Warm regards, Peter.
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jibes said 2413 days ago (December 14th, 2010)
Please Come Back To Stay
That's the way to do it! Off the Cuff is the only way to fly.
A great song and a great Christmas song. You really have something here that I think has much commercial potential and especially as a Christmas song. In fact I think the tittle should be "please be home by Christmas"

Good job!!
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PeterB7858 said 2413 days ago (December 14th, 2010)
Hogmanay?
Hi Jibes. Thanks for the listen and positive comments. I must admit when I wrote the song it referred to being home by Easter (must have been the time of year) but recording it earlier this week meant that changing the lyric to Christmas was a no-brainer. How about "please be home by hogmanay or thanksgiving"? :) But seriously, thanks for the encouragement. Take care, Peter.
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michaeljayklein said 2413 days ago (December 14th, 2010)
Superlative...
...I personally think you are well within the Top 5 most talented new members this year (and we always like that--I know I do). I truly admire your vocal prowess on this Peter--you make it sound so extemporaneous and like the words just came out of you naturally, unplanned. The guitar is at once agile and tender. Full marks on this, easy! Thanks again--and take care now, Michael
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PeterB7858 said 2413 days ago (December 14th, 2010)
Extemporaneous :-)
Now there's a word I don't hear bandied about too often. You are right, the words to this song did seem to just flow out of my sack of grey cells without too much logical thought. Once again Michael, thanks for your very kind comments. Warm regards, Peter.
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PeterB7858 said 2413 days ago (December 14th, 2010)
And Michael,
I have been catching up on some listening this morning and I am blown away by the talent that is presenting on MJ at the moment. Every song I have listened to this morning (quite a few) have been faved. There are many, many talented people around. It's great to be a member. Peter
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FEEL said 2413 days ago (December 14th, 2010)
Nice guitar layering
Fine melody and lyrics. Catchy like one of those songs you remember your past by. Thanks for sharing... Enjoyed.
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PeterB7858 said 2413 days ago (December 14th, 2010)
Thanks
Hi John, thanks for dropping by to have a listen and comment favourably on my song. I appreciate it. Take care, Peter.
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RAVENS said 2412 days ago (December 15th, 2010)
Awww
Look at that little sad alien with a broken heart. You have such a warm & soothing voice. Sad lyrics too, but I really like this song.

RAVEN ;-)
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PeterB7858 said 2412 days ago (December 15th, 2010)
Sad alien :(
Thanks for dropping by Raven. I found that image on the net. It is kinds sad/cute. Thanks for the nice compliment re my vocals. It means a lot coming from someone whose voice is really outstanding. Take care, Peter.
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kassia said 2412 days ago (December 15th, 2010)
great opening
on the guitar. great chord progression. sweet tune. you have a wonderful voice. i like the shaker, it really fit the feel of the tune and great percussion. very nice!
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PeterB7858 said 2412 days ago (December 15th, 2010)
Humbled
Thanks Shay. I really appreciate your comments. Your postings are always outstanding and I am humbled by your comments. Thanks. Warm regards, Peter.
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lengold said 2411 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
Really glad I
dropped by here. Beautiful song and performance - enjoyed.
Cheers
Len

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PeterB7858 said 2410 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
Appreciative
Hi Len. I appreciate you taking the time to have a listen and make a favourable comment on my song. Your latest, No Bad Luck, is a great song. I hope to get into a few collaborations as I develop my MJ profile and earn my stripes. Warm regards, Peter.
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Char said 2410 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
Oh, how very nice.
You sound perfectly natural and warm. You follow in the tradition of John Denver and James Taylor with universally understood lyrics and heartfelt vocals. Thank you.
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PeterB7858 said 2410 days ago (December 17th, 2010)
Kind comments
Hi Char. Thanks for the JT comparison :-). He is one of my all time favs. I appreciate your kind comments. Warm regards, Peter.
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hackneybloke said 2410 days ago (December 18th, 2010)
please come back
hey peter...i'm so pleased you came over to say hello..because now i'm listening to this. i don't know what other people have said but i'm already hearing john denver in this...and i love it. are you playing the bongos? they sound great. the lyrics are confident and assured. great tune.
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PeterB7858 said 2410 days ago (December 18th, 2010)
Bongos on order!
Hi Julian. Thanks for the PM and taking time to stop by and have a listen and comment favourably on this song. The bongos were just GB loops but I actually have a set on my Xmas list and am quietly confident about them materialising. I appreciate your positive reaction to the song. I think "Another Lonely Soul" is a fantastic song. Warm regards, Peter.
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magic matt said 2409 days ago (December 18th, 2010)
Thanks for your comment
You have a great voice Pete. Thanks for listening and commenting on my track.
Have a wicked Christmas and keep on writing.
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PeterB7858 said 2409 days ago (December 18th, 2010)
Thanks for dropping by
No problems Matt. Take care, Peter
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richard13 said 2408 days ago (December 20th, 2010)
I am so glad to read that this is not about your family
although it undoubtedly is about someone's family. The lyrics are exceptional, the vocals are warm and intimate (the new equipment?) and the picking is delightful. All around a very nice post. Cheers.
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PeterB7858 said 2408 days ago (December 20th, 2010)
It is interesting when...
Hi Richard. Yes, it is interesting when my partner, Judy, hears some of my lyrics. I have to assure her I am story telling. We are still going strong after many years :-) Thanks for the encouraging comments. The new equipment does make a difference. Take care. regards, Peter.
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magnatone said 2407 days ago (December 20th, 2010)
Come Back To Stay
wow - how did i miss this?? glad i saw you in chat today - it made me click on your name and see what you had new! this is just beautiful Pete - what a gentle touch your voice and guitar playing have - this is touching and lovely - thanks and happy holidays!
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PeterB7858 said 2407 days ago (December 20th, 2010)
Gracious
Hi Karen. You are such a gracious and positive MJ member. I really appreciate your encouragement and comments. Hope you have a nice Xmas too. Warm regards, Peter.
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that80sboy said 2406 days ago (December 22nd, 2010)
nice
like a peaceful summer afternoon ....smoooooth track
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PeterB7858 said 2406 days ago (December 22nd, 2010)
Thanks
Thanks Mike. Appreciate the comments. Take care, Peter.
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WharmtonRise said 2404 days ago (December 23rd, 2010)
Marvelous
Excellent musicality. Love the lyrics. Really beautiful.
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PeterB7858 said 2404 days ago (December 24th, 2010)
Santa is on the move...
Hey Andrew. Thanks so much for dropping by and making positive comments about my song. Have a great Xmas. It is 11.40 pm on Xmas Eve here and Santa is on the move. Take care. Peter.
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fasteddie said 2399 days ago (December 28th, 2010)
YEs
First of all, I really love the tone of that acoustic guitar.

Excellent old school folk sound.

Great vocals. For just "sprang out" it sure sounds pretty darned good.

The bongos are a very nice touch BTW.

Good stuff man. Can't wait to hear more.
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PeterB7858 said 2399 days ago (December 29th, 2010)
Nuances
Hi Michael. Thanks for your encouraging comments on my song. The acoustics were recorded without any effects with my new AKG condensor mic. It seems to do a great job picking up their nuances. Have a great New Year's Eve. Regards, Peter.
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ramonaji said 2397 days ago (December 30th, 2010)
KC
says you have a perfect voice! KC has an awesome voice, so he must know! You do have... reminds me of Cat Stevens/John Denver... very nice voice!
These lyrics are so relatable.... great song!
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PeterB7858 said 2397 days ago (December 30th, 2010)
Thanks
Hi Ramona. Thanks for the compliment re my vocals. I appreciate you taking time to listen to my music and provide support and encouragement. Have a great New Year's Eve. Warm regards, Peter.
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composerclark said 2397 days ago (December 31st, 2010)
Beautiful
This is a touching, sensitive song, performed and produced beautifully, and with subtlety; Very moving. Wonderful job! Bravo!
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PeterB7858 said 2397 days ago (December 31st, 2010)
Happy New Year
Thanks for dropping by for a listen Clark. I appreciate your support. Have a great New Year. Take care, Peter.
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Relic67 said 2395 days ago (January 2nd, 2011)
nice
really nice guitar and vocals.
bongos a nice touch. tasteful synth too.
the way the arrangement evolves keeps it interesting.
applause!
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PeterB7858 said 2395 days ago (January 2nd, 2011)
In need of a bridge?
Thanks for taking the time to have a listen. Appreciate it. Yes, it is quite a long song with the same melody running so I had to build it up to keep the listener's attention. I probably should have added in a bridge. Take care, Peter.
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Relic67 said 2394 days ago (January 3rd, 2011)
bridge
I think it works OK without bridge because of the changes in instrumentation etc...
but a cool bridge can add to enjoyment of a song, so I'd say do whatever feels right to you!
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kevmikwa said 2392 days ago (January 5th, 2011)
Smooth
This reminds me a lot of hackneybloke's "Another Lonely Soul" which I see you've heard. Acoustic-guitar-driven, folksy vocal, minimal percussion, big atmosphere. This is a great feel and nice mix.

A part of me wishes you could have added some harmonies late, as I think your voice would sound great tracked against itself. A couple of the lyric lines seem like they were a bit forced-in to fit the cadence, but it's easy to see they're coming from the heart, so such "transgressions" are very easily dismissed.

A little personal thing about the kit drums: at the entrance (2:57) and exit (3:39), it would be nice to get them in and out somehow. Drummers rarely just start or stop playing - if you can't craft a pick up fill out of a couple notes, at least hit a cymbal lightly on the "1". I believe you would be surprised how such a small change can enhance the realism.

Thanks for sharing this one.
PeterB7858 said 2391 days ago (January 6th, 2011)
Detailed feedback :)
Thanks for the listen and the detailed feedback. I appreciate it. I agree re the harmonies. I have been solo singer/guitarist for so long I sometimes overlook the power of harmony. I might try to add some in. I also agree re the drums. They are GB loops but are not editable (like some GB loops are) so I kindof just went with them as is. The whole midi drum thing is something I need to spend more time on. Thanks again for your considered comments. Take care, Peter
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echoroom said 2390 days ago (January 7th, 2011)
Hey peter
This is fab. Wonderful guitar, and you have a great voice. i agree that I'd like to hear some harmonies (though I'm crap at them myself), but overall this is a subtle, classy track with a very intimate feel. I use a presonus too - very good quality interface.
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PeterB7858 said 2390 days ago (January 7th, 2011)
Harmonies
Hey Steve, thanks for taking time to have a listen and providing encouraging comments. I am on holidays (camping at the beach - summer in the land down under) at the moment but I have resolved to work on some harmonies for this song when I get back. The new mic and interface did make a great deal of difference. I am looking forward to using them more soon. Take care, Peter.
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CIASM_ZENABI_ said 2390 days ago (January 7th, 2011)
come back
very well played, arranged and produced. vox work really well. laid back but with a nice energy. cheers graham
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PeterB7858 said 2390 days ago (January 7th, 2011)
Thanks
Hi Graham. Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate you taking time to have a listen and provide encouraging feedback. Warm regards, Peter.
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Daugrin said 2380 days ago (January 16th, 2011)
Taste...
Thanks for sharing this nugget, I've played this one behind a lot of people. Great job on the vocals... just a harmony or two away...

Daug
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PeterB7858 said 2380 days ago (January 16th, 2011)
Missing harmonies...
Hey Daug, thanks for having a listen. I am going to work on some harmonies for this and Loob is having a go at some drums, so we'll see where it heads. I appreciate your comments. Thanks, Peter.
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Parichayaka said 2380 days ago (January 16th, 2011)
honest, moving and
What an enjoyable song! The various guitar tracks compliment each other so nicely and I like how you add the percussion carefully as not to overwhelm the flow of the song.
The lyrics are moving and your delivery feels sincere. Your voice sounds great - both the recording and performance.
If I were to open my big mouth it would be about the bass (fuller sound, more clearly defined melody wise) and for the percussion I would decide on which way to go - either traditional drumset or bongos with shakers. But that's really just me! Feel free to ingore that part:)

I'll have to go on and listen to more of your songs, I really liked this one! Surprised I haven't come across your music yet.
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PeterB7858 said 2380 days ago (January 17th, 2011)
Thanks..
Thanks Pari (if I may call you that - I noticed some others had, so I hope you don't mind). I appreciate you dropping by for a listen and appreciate your thoughtful comments. I did try and slowly develop the song by adding percussion along the way but I was just using GB loops and need to do a fair bit more learning before I have greater control over the outcome. The bass was just a modified GB loop as well. I have only been an MJ member for a couple of months but am learning heaps and having a great time. Thanks again. King regards, Peter.
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sammydix said 2380 days ago (January 17th, 2011)
Chill tune
OMG, we have the same method of lyric writing! I simply can't "plan" anything. Just let it happen. Similar?
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PeterB7858 said 2379 days ago (January 17th, 2011)
Just mumbling along...
Hi Sammy, you just have to go with what works, eh :-) Thanks for having a listen. regards, Peter.
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Silky5 said 2378 days ago (January 18th, 2011)
Natural and subtle
Lovely Song and lyrics. What a great sound. It's so in your comfort zone in range isn't it ? I wonder what your voice could do just pushed a little. Very Very Good Sir.

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PeterB7858 said 2378 days ago (January 18th, 2011)
An offer too good to refuse
Hi Paul. Thanks for the encouraging comments. And thanks for the offer re orchestral backing. I will definitely take you up on that in a future project. Take care, Peter.
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Bob Rodgers said 2376 days ago (January 20th, 2011)
A
lovely song Peter, really nice vocals and I love your acoustic guitar tone, some fine playing and a great mix.
Love the bongos too and this is a wonderful performance.
Very much enjoyed and thanks for the download.

Bob
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PeterB7858 said 2376 days ago (January 20th, 2011)
Download :-)
Hi Bob. Thanks for dropping by for a listen. I appreciate the kind comments. Happy that you found it worthy of a download. Warm regards, Peter.
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lholden said 2367 days ago (January 29th, 2011)
lovely voice
Your voice makes me want to listen, listen, listen.. The strong panning of the guitars took me a bit by surprise. It may just be my feeling, but I'd love to hear the guitars but a bit into the center. Otherwise, the mix is beautiful. Thanks for sharing - beautiful really.
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PeterB7858 said 2367 days ago (January 29th, 2011)
Guitar panning
Thanks for the kind comments about my vocals. In relation to the guitars, I have actually panned them a bit closer to center in the final version I have at home. I really appreciate your feedback. Take care, Peter.
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fambroski said 2366 days ago (January 30th, 2011)
Nashville calling...
The lyrics (story) is captivating. I found myself a little anxious hoping that 'she' in fact came back. Good song mate.
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PeterB7858 said 2366 days ago (January 30th, 2011)
Another verse?
Hey Miche. Thanks for dropping by. Unless I write another verse we'll never know :-) I really like your latest! Regards, Peter.
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Philip18 said 2278 days ago (April 29th, 2011)
Good job!
Love the fingerpicking that runs through the song, but also like the way you bring in other things, too. Beautiful clean production - everything clear and bright. So how did Christmas turn out? :-)
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PeterB7858 said 2276 days ago (April 30th, 2011)
Paris in the spring....
Ah, you have to wait for the reprise to find out whether she actually comes back! I am actually working with Loob (Freddie) on an updated version of this song with drums and bass throughout. I have also deleted a verse and added a bridge. One of these days it will be re-posted. Enjoy Paris. Peter.
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