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it hurts/Gaylen


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tokai

 Genre: Hard Rock

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Another track that Gaylen put his tonsils too. I think this is not our favorite track, but we will let you give us some pointers if you do not mind? Cheers G for your continued support.
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Lyrics

I'm alive because I chose to be
you cant cut your way inside of me
I will die when I need to leave
this fire I hide keeps me burning
Im burning to life
no you cant close your eyes
Im everything that you wanted
Im the love of your life

come be mine tonight
stitch yourself to my side
my horrid heart is beating inside you
feel me bleeding your lite
listen lady
your mine and you know it
It hurts it hurts so bad
the way that I show it
just let me inside
I'll fill you up with life
It hurt it hurt so bad
it make me want to cry
i offer the world that comes undone
it comes undone for my love
I give you my blood
that you dont want
it pours on you like a flood
that you dont want
youre alive because I let you be
theres no way for you to escape me
You will die when Im done with you
you better hope its a long time before Im done with you
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Hits: 2172
Comments: 19
Fans: 17
Plays: 68
Downloads: 48

Uploaded: Dec 30, 2010 - 08:16:39 AM
Last Updated: Dec 30, 2010 - 08:20:06 AM Last Played: May 14, 2017 - 05:04:10 PM
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hackneybloke said 2456 days ago (December 30th, 2010)
it hurts
love the progression, unexpected. really like the section from 2.00 with those electronic sounds. art punk...all of it. gaylen signature existential wailing. love the galloping guitar end.
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alackbass said 2456 days ago (December 30th, 2010)
it hurts/Gaylen
Killer! I love the guitar sounds and riff. Gaylen does what he does so well! Great collab!
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ted23 said 2456 days ago (December 30th, 2010)
Hey hey
This is different. Nice ideas and creative arrangement.
Diggin the hard guitars and electronic mix.
Evil twist in the bass is groovy. Gaylens vox are full on and as always are delivered in interesting and excellent ways.
Nice one
ktb said 2456 days ago (December 30th, 2010)
it hurts
I think I hear you two exploring your slightly darker heavier selves.
I enjoyed the progression and thought the synth work and the drums complimented perfectly. Your guitar work is vivid here. Gaylen is..well.. Gaylen :-) but seriously he's spot on with the angst. Another cool pic friend.
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ramonaji said 2456 days ago (December 30th, 2010)
This is good stuff!
I like the changes! I am "hearing" some background vocals, perhaps by another singer entirely, to enhance the overall song... Other than that, it sounds pretty great..!
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Carrie71 said 2456 days ago (December 30th, 2010)
It hurts so good!
Honestly, I don't think there's one that you two have done that isn't anything but amazing. Not my fav by you two, but is still one to enjoy again and again. I am a fan.
RAVENS said 2456 days ago (December 30th, 2010)
Awesome
You guys work so well together, this is another gem. Vocals & lyrics kick a$$ & the music is killer. Great stuff!

RAVEN ;-)
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BirdmanWayne94 said 2456 days ago (December 30th, 2010)
I don't know...
... why it wouldn't be a favorite?! I can tell that there was hard work that went into this. Interesting choice of instruments and a GREAT music work. Fine vocals from Gaylen too. I really like this! :)
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fasteddie said 2456 days ago (December 30th, 2010)
My
favorite part of this song is the changeup at about 1:24 or so. That is really cool; its like the sweet spot of the song.

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Good one!
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magnatone said 2456 days ago (December 30th, 2010)
it hurts
music is so subjective isn't it? personally, i love this, and it IS on my "fave" list of yours! i love the line "that gaylen put his tonsils to" - LOL - that's so ..... um .... accurate! great work you two - you're a match made in heaven!
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bud said 2455 days ago (December 31st, 2010)
Our black sheep often
become our faves over time. This is pretty awesome. Love the synthy break. Cool track and another great collab.
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Vic Holman said 2455 days ago (December 31st, 2010)
it hurts so good
well it works for me.

great job guys.
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Gaylen75 said 2454 days ago (January 1st, 2011)
Steve The Great
I love that when you are rocking a song you think of me. this is another fantastic sound bed that I got to play with. I hope that you keep calling my name when you write great tunes.
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dave_b said 2454 days ago (January 1st, 2011)
it hurts
Vocal are very effective especially in the upper register. The crunchy guitars and blippy synth lines sound great to me. Structurally this song is ABCDAB. I think there is not enough repetition to give a listener an anchor point. It is easy to get lost in the various sections
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tokai said 2449 days ago (January 6th, 2011)
Cheers
Thank you everybody for your comments and support.
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Alannah said 2448 days ago (January 7th, 2011)
Now ......
... who's channeling J. Morrison ... (among others) ...... nice ! I like the darkness that surrounds it too ..... reminds me of the late 70's when some of the darker rawk was not metal yet .....
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lengold said 2444 days ago (January 11th, 2011)
Massive
Loving this very unusual song and all the surprising changes throughout. You make a great team.
Cheers
Len


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Reggie_Pole said 2432 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
It doesn't hurt at all
In fact, it's a real pleasure. You guys produce such serious stuff -- I like that. Another excellent vocal performance from the G man. Like that mix of heavy guitar and synths. Drums sound great. Monster bass drummage. Dig the guitar riffage. Good work on the production.
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tonestones said 2427 days ago (January 28th, 2011)
Excellent track
Gaylen is brilliant as usual. Love Steve's guitars. Very nice production.
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