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Burn


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obbster

 Genre: Rock

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So a version of this song was written by Gordy Macdonald years and years ago. About a year and half ago he played it for me with a hope that I could turn it into a real song. So I went home and tried to remember it and I remembered it slightly wrong. I spent a few weeks trying to turn it into something and It was close to being complete. Then it was forgotten. A few weeks ago i stumbled upon it again and using lots of half-complete lyrics from Gordy and myself I wrote a new melody and this is the outcome. True Story.



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Lyrics
Ill Drink a little slower
can't make my mind slow down
Im thinking of nothing
at a million miles an hour
makes me burn a little deeper

Chorus
But all my dreams are gone
you were there before it burned away
and all our love is done
im just looking for a brighter day
Just to hold you one last time

You could lie a little better
Make the hurt a little sharper
If I stop I'm going to make it up
Noone will ever know

Chorus
But all my dreams are gone
you were there before it burned away
and all our love is done
im just looking for a brighter day
Im waiting for a song
Im waiting for the one
Im waiting for you
to come into my arms

Yeah it burns me deep inside
yeah it burns me
Deep inside

Chorus
But all my dreams are gone
you were there before it burned away
and all our love is done
im just looking for a brighter day

But all my dreams are gone
you were there before it burned away
when all our love is done
im just looking for a brighter day

When all my dreams are

(if you were here tonight
i know id give you life
but all hear i silence)
Song Stats
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Comments: 3
Fans: 1
Plays: 34
Downloads: 34
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Jan 09, 2011 - 03:49:15 PM
Last Updated: Jan 09, 2011 - 03:49:15 PM Last Played: Jan 17, 2017 - 07:55:56 AM
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iMac 21.5" 3.06Ghz
Software:
Logic Pro 9, Alicia's Keys
Comments
scofugate said 2237 days ago (January 9th, 2011)
This
is just wonderful. The Alicia's Keys piano sounds great, ,,but.,,you play them so well!
Nice production!
Love the powerful Choruses.
Nice from A to Z.
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smokey bacon jnr said 2236 days ago (January 10th, 2011)
very professional sound
Like the way the piano seques into the rock section. Sounds like something you would definitely hear on the radio. The track really builds. Not sure about the fade out, could have done with a big crashing finale and then maybe the piano again on its own. Good work!
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dave_b said 2236 days ago (January 10th, 2011)
Burn
Very nice intro and the tone on that piano is great. Good vocal. Structurally, the different lengths chorus 1 and chorus 2 detract from the chorus' usual role of providing and anchor point for listeners.
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