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Don't say your coming (then you don't)


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jibes

 Genre: Rock & Roll

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First of 24 new song I have written. This one is cute, about unrequited love no doubt. #:) When I say 24 new songs not all will make the cut but most of them will. I will be busy for a good long time!!

Using pointless picks of course.
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Lyrics
Somebody's coming to see me
I can't wait that long no no
Said she'd be over right away
I think she been lying to me now
Somebody said they'd be right over
and make it worth my while to wait
But I'm just sick n' tired of sitting here
I think I'll go out it's getting late.

Chorus
Don't say y' coming and y' don't
Don't tell me y' coming and y' won't
Dont say y' coming and y' don't
Oh oh oh oh you liar.

I met this gal last saturday night
she seemed alright to me
we hit it off right from the start
She said I was her dream baby
But the very next time I saw her
She said she couldn't see me just then
However she'd come over to my room
And that's why I been waiting here since then

Chorus:

Now I fell asleep here on my couch
When I hear a knocking on my door
I go to the mirror to check myself
I don't want her to think that I been sore
But it's just the mail man standing there
He puts a package in my hand
So I go and lay down on my bed
Things didn't go exactly as I planned.

Chorus:
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Hits: 2108
Comments: 36
Fans: 14
Plays: 78
Downloads: 58
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Jan 22, 2011 - 03:44:45 PM
Last Updated: Jan 23, 2011 - 12:48:55 PM Last Played: Nov 16, 2016 - 03:32:44 AM
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neilh79 said 2284 days ago (January 22nd, 2011)
Don't say your comin
Catchy intro, nice riff and the muting works well. Could have had the muting a little less obvious for me its a little far in front. Cracking vocal and exciting lyrics kind of Neil Youngish vocal.. good job man
jibes said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
Neil
Thanks and welcome to MJ! Muting is something I do too much of but it's my style.
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neilh79 said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
muting!!
dont get me wrong its not an insult, i love muting just it was just a little loud over the other guitar is all i meant!! its a great piece love the style
jibes said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
Neil
Sorry, I know what you meant and I agree with you. It's funny how you can listen to your song over and over again before you post it and it's just fine but afterwords you notice all the things you did wrong and should have done differently. Perhaps listening too much before posting is not good.
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alackbass said 2284 days ago (January 22nd, 2011)
Don't say your coming
24 new Jibes songs!! Awesome! Okay, I just downloaded this one! When can I expect the next!
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jibes said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
alackbass
Thanks for the comments . Well it may or may not take too long. Two collaborators are busy on some right now but talent can't be rushed!
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MarcusPerry said 2284 days ago (January 22nd, 2011)
Cool
Hey I really dig the guitar groove on this one. I like how you panned different guitars...how many guitar tracks are in this?
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jibes said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
Marcus
I'm glad you liked it. I had the original groove (mono) and two other stereo paned + the Lead stereo track.
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jdholliday said 2284 days ago (January 22nd, 2011)
Neal
yet another classic jibes song, the alien Rocker strikes again with a very well written song, great production, silky smooth vocal delivery, great post! keep em coming my friend!
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jibes said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
JD
Thanks so much! I hope the other songs turn out as well as this one.
Check out my latest song called JESSICA
PeterB7858 said 2284 days ago (January 22nd, 2011)
Catchy guitar riffs
Hey Neil, nice guitar driven song. Catchy riffs and your vocals fit the mood of the song really well. Nice hook in the chorus. Good song! Downloaded. Warm regards, Peter.
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jibes said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
Peter
I appreciate your comments. Hooks are what we look for!
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egobandit said 2284 days ago (January 22nd, 2011)
Wow
24 songs, Love the jangle in this and the Lou Reed vocals man this is tops!
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jibes said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
ego b
Your words are music to my ears! I'm gonna have to find out who this Lou Reed guy is 'cuz people are always sayin' I sound like him. #:)
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papag said 2284 days ago (January 22nd, 2011)
Don't
think about it...the promise is too much. Nice arrangement, vocals and lyrics. Sweet.

thanks for the dl :)
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jibes said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
Papag
Right you are! That's what crossed my mind! Thanks for the comment.
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Bob6stringer said 2283 days ago (January 22nd, 2011)
Pure craftsmanship, especially the break @2:37.
First thing that struck me was your crystal-clear production. If you've got a whole "song cycle" or album or opera or whatever that you're doing with this unified production sensibility, you BETTER take these to the commercial market because there'll be not only solid songwriting and delivery but that great, unified mastering.

On the face, the lyrics are classic pop-rock, not out to change the world. But your vocal delivery has a knowing nod between the lines, gives it a "meta" layer for those of us who like that kind of thing.

That lead guitar break at 2:37 is pure genius. Don't forget me if you want a jamming partner, whether you need a collab or not. Just fir kix, I'd be glad to sponge-up some of your sensibilities. (Sorry for the long note, but I wanna praise you publicly, not hide it in a PM.)
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jibes said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
Bob
Bummer about the Bears! I don't know if you are a fan or not but it's tough if you are. Like I said, I now have Ozone 4 and this helps a lot but I'm still a novice! But thanks so much! Btw a collab would be fine and Lord knows I have plenty of material. Thanks again.
Check out my latest song called JESSICA
J.A.Stewart said 2283 days ago (January 22nd, 2011)
Terrific Production
Strong musical sensibilities and performance combined into a solid production mix equals a great-sounding tune.

Nicely done, Neal. ;)


--- Joe
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jibes said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
J.A.
Thanks so much! I was diggin your Lover-Boy song.
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MarkHolbrook said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
A great
rich full sound on this! I like!
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jibes said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
Mark
Thanks for the comment. I hope the rest turn out as good.
Check out my latest song called JESSICA
sammydix said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
Unique
jibes, there's something about the quality of your voice that should go beyond these pages at MJ. It's like listening to some of my fav "commercial" artists, but with the pleasure of being able to communicate directly with them.
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jibes said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
Sammy
Thanks so much. Just li'l ol' me singing, but I really appreciate your words.
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Jarvoid said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
Is this a
country rock ballad ? I like it very much...and ha ha can identify with the lyric as this once happened to me...left waiting cooling my heels like a lemon.....D/Load deffo ....so is that 1 down and 23 potentially to come ?


Jarvoid
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jibes said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
Jarman
Glad you can relate! That's my goal. There are a couple of the 24 that I'm not too fond of but I could do them and maybe that should be my other goal. But you know, I wrote these in just a few hours (off the cuff) but this one I spent several hours on it turning it into a finished song. So it helps if it's somewhat ready to go from the start instead of a very sketchy thing. Some are very crude.
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michaeljayklein said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
Topdrawer!
I doubt if there is one crummy one in the 24 either--impossible. More excellent work from you Neal--I liked this very much all over! Michael
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jibes said 2283 days ago (January 23rd, 2011)
Michael
There are some crummy ones! But like I said above to Jarvoid these were "Off the cuff" and if all don't make it I think I could write some more to make up for them. At least I hope so. Thanks for your comments.
Check out my latest song called JESSICA
dave_b said 2282 days ago (January 24th, 2011)
Don't say your coming
Classic song, and as usual your vocs deliver with tons of personality. This one reminds me of Tom Petty. I dig the guitar lines, and the mix seems just right to me.
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jibes said 2279 days ago (January 26th, 2011)
Dave
Thanks for your comments.
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blaky smith said 2282 days ago (January 24th, 2011)
Great
I come back after listening this tune one more time. To download...
Very nice piece, well done in every way. thanks Neal.
Marc
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jibes said 2279 days ago (January 26th, 2011)
Blaky
Thanks for listening and dl.
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RAVENS said 2282 days ago (January 24th, 2011)
Awesome
What a great song. You wrote 24 new songs? Man, that is so cool. Well this one sounds fab, awesome guitar playing, great vocals & lyrics too!

RAVEN ;-)
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jibes said 2279 days ago (January 26th, 2011)
Raven
Thanks so much! I have 3 or 4 in the works even now and my next one is gonna work out fine. As I listen to the raw songs I don't know if it would be worth doing all 24 but a goodish bunch will work out. I can always write more of course. #:)
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tonestones said 2277 days ago (January 29th, 2011)
Good kind of busy
Looking forward to the rest of the new tunes. Good job.
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lholden said 2277 days ago (January 29th, 2011)
love it
I like the vocals on this one too. The words are very familiar too. You wrote 24 new songs.. can't wait to listen! Thanks for sharing.
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