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I usually write in the rock genre but I wanted to try my hand at Country.
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I only wish I had someone...to love me the way I live you,
but you won't let me in your heart...and it's lonely outside,
You love to dance to the music in my mind,
You must know what I'm thinking ...cause you play me everytime,
You've got me thinking...maybe I'm wrong,
Maybe everybody else has been right...about you all along..and,
who was that guy...who had the lonesome blues?,
I know why he was singing em...cause I..I got em too,
You stay out late and ya don't come home till I'm gone,
You got a way of twisting things...so that I'm the one that's wrong,
You've got me thinking...maybe I'm right,
Maybe I'm right for leaving and..maybe I'll start tonight,
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Uploaded: May 18, 2011 - 05:21:48 AM
Last Updated: May 18, 2011 - 03:19:50 PM Last Played: Jan 17, 2017 - 12:34:36 PM
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Copied and pated drum samples, Dean electric Guitar, Memphis Bas, Shure SM58 Microphone, Boss 1180 Digital Recorder
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tempie said 2289 days ago (May 18th, 2011)
hey man, i like the johnny paycheck vibe
the hook isn't as obvious as is usual with a tune like this, and that threw me off a bit. i kept waiting for "you've got me thinking..maybe i'm wrong...maybe everybody else has been right...about you all along" to keep coming back around. As is it's almost stream of consciousness. Beat poets meet honky tonk. Which is cool, in it's own way. But sometimes you have to give the people what they want. Enjoyed it, i'd like to hear more of these.
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dave_b said 2288 days ago (May 18th, 2011)
You've got me thinking
Good hook and it comes in at the right place. You have a melodic "rise" over it which is good, but the song could be stronger with a drum fill leading up to, and a high harmony over the first bar of the chorus. The character has changed his thinking from the first to the last chorus. This is a good opportunity to insert a bridge section to explain why.
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J_Gretch said 2288 days ago (May 18th, 2011)
Outlaw vibe
Shades of David Allen Coe ,or maybe Waylon...not necessarily the lyrics,,, but the music and phrasing....I like the sound.




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KCsGROOVE said 2287 days ago (May 19th, 2011)
enjoyed the lyrics
cool tongue-in-cheek song :-)
Cool one!
:-)
KC
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falcef said 2283 days ago (May 23rd, 2011)
You've got me thinking
Salve from Italy a song interessant very style country good sound. Bye
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Jockamo said 2195 days ago (August 19th, 2011)
Honky tonk
Two stepping in a big ole Texas honky tonk......Great tune thanks for sharing
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Country music, also called country and western music or country-western, is an amalgam of popular musical forms developed in the Southern United States, with roots in traditional folk music, Celtic Music, Blues, Gospel music, and Old-time music. Howe

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