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Broken (New version)


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obbster

 Genre: Rock

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An updated version of a song I posted a few years ago.
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Lyrics
i’m broken down
The pieces of my heart
Just bleed ever after

I was your clown
But baby your circus needs
love more than laughter

Remember now?
Dancing, pretending.
Full of half-finished singing

So kiss me now,
And I'll show you forever
As cold as you've shown me

Remember I’ll be here when you change your mind (slowly)
If it’s a matter of trust then I’m sure we'll find it (Too late)
cause i want this more than
and i need you less than
i did before

I'm just a man,
Built up by your promise
Empty... whatever

How do you suppose?
I take this while smiling,
This pointless surrender

Remember I’ll be here when you change your mind (slowly)
If it’s a matter of trust then I’m sure we'll find it (find it)
cause i want this more than
and i need you less than

cause i want this more than
and i need you less than
(i did before)

Remember I’ll be here when you change your mind
if its a matter of faith then ill pray you find it
Song Stats
Hits: 1325
Comments: 5
Fans: 3
Plays: 23
Downloads: 62
Votes: 0
Uploaded: May 07, 2011 - 02:35:43 PM
Last Updated: May 07, 2011 - 02:35:43 PM Last Played: May 21, 2015 - 11:49:30 PM
Song License
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Hardware:
iMac 3.06Ghz 21.5", M-audio keystation
Software:
Logic Pro 9, Battery 3, B4 2, Kontakt 4, Alicia's Keys, Scarbee Bass
Comments
alackbass said 2089 days ago (May 7th, 2011)
Broken (New version)
Great melody and vocal! Impressive mix and production!
Check out my latest song called Mean Miss Teacher
ShadowofNine said 2088 days ago (May 8th, 2011)
Me likes
Fine performance...enjoyed
Check out my latest song called Gone (with Eagle)
Reggie_Pole said 2088 days ago (May 8th, 2011)
Chorus king
You da master of the powerful chorus. This is a fine example. Always liked this one. Nits: might prefer a little distance on the drums. Vocals are a bit hot. But the thing is -- composition -- tops.
Check out my latest song called UnerSpizm
RAVENS said 2088 days ago (May 8th, 2011)
Great Song
You are one of the best melody writers I know. All of your music is so catchy, and your voice sounds awesome here. Great Stuff!

RAVEN ;-)
Check out my latest song called Tattooed Scars (w/ Sigmund, Scofugate, Rok41)
dave_b said 2088 days ago (May 8th, 2011)
Broken
Pretty melody, well sung. Simple, elegant arrangement. Great production.
Check out my latest song called Llarions Blues
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