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Premonitions (2011)


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MetalPhil

 Genre: Metal
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So yeah, I've made a habit of uploading new versions of my songs in my infrequent appearances over here, so I apologize if I'm boring you all, but I like to compare to previous mixes and this one is a great comparison point. Not sure that I'm sold on the guitar sound in the choruses or the snare, but I am nearing a "this sounds really good" moment.

Anyway, this is a rough mix and unmastered. So obviously it's quiet.
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Awakened, awakened by a form in my head -- familiar, ethereal, A woman, pressed against her warm, supple skin -- a face filled with care and love, A moment, shadows on the windowsill -- the flames erupt beyond the shade..
Then she dies, She roasts in the flames, Twisting, burning -- her screams erupt in pain, There’s no end, To torture or flame, That I could never see her again.
Silhouettes, casting from the moon of her form -- beautiful, ethereal, Receding, the wall between death and life -- her sunken eyes sharp through the night, Rising, rising from the bed I look down -- her soft breath shudders from her,
Ending, I will not see her die before me -- I cannot bear to watch her suffer,
She will rise, Scorched and burned, Twisting, turning -- my screams erupt in pain, There’s no end, To torture or flame,
That I could never think of her again..
She will die, She’ll roast in the flames, Twisting, burning -- her screams erupting in pain, There’s no end, To torture or flames, And I must never see her again..
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Uploaded: Jun 30, 2011 - 06:32:23 AM
Last Updated: Jun 30, 2011 - 06:32:23 AM Last Played: Jan 02, 2015 - 11:05:10 AM
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Hardware:
iMac, Shit Bass™, Parker Fly, Fender Acoustic, Blue Snowball, Schechter 7 string
Software:
Logic, Superior, Peavey MKIII HP
Comments
dave_b said 2275 days ago (June 30th, 2011)
Premonitions
All mellow for a while, and then the cookie monster vocals kick in. What a contrast!
Check out my latest song called Llarions Blues
Les_Kloo said 2275 days ago (June 30th, 2011)
Progressive death metal
Nice melody, and it does sound really good. The power sections obviously play well against the softer parts. I like the flowing quality of your voice during the verses. Well done.
Check out my latest song called Arctis II
gadzooks said 2274 days ago (July 1st, 2011)
Premonitions (2011)
Love the way this starts ... nice mix on the acoustic and vocals and then it just kicks in real crunchy. Nice play between the two. Right on stuff! Excellent mix.
SG
Check out my latest song called Emoji
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Name: MetalPhil
Location: Uppsala Sweden
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MetalPhil hails from Wausau, Wisconsin where he trained black squirrels in ninjitsu. He is also an author and sociologist in his free time. He listens to video game music, wishes his life included more tap-dancing, and that people read his blog.... [see more]

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