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Evil Kiss


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LukeJL

 Genre: Hard Rock

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This is the first time I've written lyrics. I've no idea what I'm doing really, I just studied some songs from bands I listen to...Breaking Benjamin, Three Days Grace, Skillet...And tried writing. I played piano to what I imagine the vocals may sound like but I don't sing so I don't really have any idea about that either.
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Lyrics
Walking this endless road
How could I have known
That you'd leave me so alone
Awaiting the end I
Close my eyes, dreaming
A life that has some meaning
Free from your evil kiss

And it's just fine
Trust me it's alright
No more lies, fights
Everything's just right

Something always gets in the way
It's never easy
To get you out of my head
Like a nightmare you're always there
Thousands of times you have failed
Shattered dreams entail
Now I'll end this chapter here
No more having to live in fear

Waking up so alone
I wish I could know
Why all your love had to go
Sitting here so cold I
Pray for a way to
Make it through another day
Without your evil kiss
And it's just fine
Trust me it's alright
No more lies, fights
Everything's just right

Chorus (x2)

Cause I'm so Alone
And I can't help it
No I can't help it
And I can't help it
No I can't help it
NO

Chorus (x2)
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Uploaded: Feb 26, 2012 - 05:43:04 PM
Last Updated: Feb 26, 2012 - 05:46:58 PM Last Played: Jan 17, 2017 - 04:08:06 PM
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alackbass said 2036 days ago (February 26th, 2012)
Evil Kiss
Some really great modern metal. The intricate synth and piano work are wonderful. They are the perfect melodic contrast to the powerful metal guitars. Great lyrics! Somebody has to sing them so this amazing track will truly be complete. Although it does hold up astonishing well as an instrumental.
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LukeJL said 2035 days ago (February 27th, 2012)
Thank you
I threw in the synth stuff to try to make it my "own," be different from the bands I mentioned above because I don't want to sound the same. Thanks for always taking the time to listen and comment! I love hearing what other musicians have to say about my work!
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finkeldink said 2036 days ago (February 26th, 2012)
Nicely done
Yeah you can definitely hear the influences of the groups you mentioned. That's basically the same groups I've been listening to lately as well.

Cool composition and nice heavy melodies.

I say keep going in the direction your going. Sounds great!
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LukeJL said 2035 days ago (February 27th, 2012)
I will
Probably keep going in this direction, I love producing these king of songs! Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment, it means a lot!
Check out my latest song called Rain Falling (Finished)
Les_Kloo said 2036 days ago (February 26th, 2012)
Evil
I like it. Mix is sounding very good, with an especially juicy guitar sound. Lots of dynamics. Get this to a vocalist immediately.
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LukeJL said 2035 days ago (February 27th, 2012)
Thanks
That's the absolute best I'm able to make a song sound as far as quality goes with my recording setup (which consists of garageband, my guitar, distortion pedal, and a midi keyboard I just got, so it's not really a recording setup at all lol) I do hope to find a good vocalist soon, start a band or something. Thanks for the comment!
Check out my latest song called Rain Falling (Finished)
carbon said 2035 days ago (February 27th, 2012)
you
could always just experiment with singing. you might be surprised at what comes out. heck, you've already got the lyrics and that's half the battle. the instrumentation in this piece is amazing. nice work!
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LukeJL said 2035 days ago (February 27th, 2012)
Singing
I don't think singing is really for me..I just don't feel that I have the voice I guess. I don't know, maybe I'll give it a try sometime. Thanks for listening!
Check out my latest song called Rain Falling (Finished)
VicDiesel said 2034 days ago (February 28th, 2012)
hard rock
Sounds good to me. Get someone to sing. That piano is actually fun by as such.
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Sir Bass said 2034 days ago (February 28th, 2012)
Hey man
This is rocking, I can sing with this music ,we can callab. What do you say?
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LukeJL said 2028 days ago (March 5th, 2012)
Thanks!
Thanks for the offer but I think I may have actually found someone local that I know to sing it. If it doesn't work out I'll send you a message, it would be cool to collaborate!
Check out my latest song called Rain Falling (Finished)
snowdragon said 2034 days ago (February 28th, 2012)
I guess I should read
the description before jumping ahead to the lyrics.

Here I am patiently waiting for the singing to start . . . lol.

Excellent tune. Take up one of the offers to sing it for you. For a first shot at lyrics, these are excellent.
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