Home Music Articles Forums Blog Chat More...      

Wings through the Window


by

jobu

 Genre: Other

Get Flash to see this player.

Description
Slow country blues with some cool twists. Thanks for listening. This is a big departure for me. Also sorry it ends so suddenly. Just getting some ideas down. I've since written another verse.
Leave a Comment
You must be registered and logged-in to comment.
Song Stats
Hits: 1105
Comments: 9
Fans: 8
Plays: 35
Downloads: 35

Uploaded: Jul 15, 2012 - 04:11:22 PM
Last Updated: Jul 15, 2012 - 04:11:22 PM Last Played: Jan 30, 2017 - 11:16:52 AM
Song License
Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Creative Commons

Song Actions
share on facebook share on twitter download song
Comments
Loob said 1718 days ago (July 15th, 2012)
Love the tremelo gtrs!
Good vocals too. Kinda has a Jackson Browne feeling. Very good!
Check out my latest song called Paper Moon with Melanie Cholie
alackbass said 1718 days ago (July 15th, 2012)
Wings through the Window
Awesome melody! Great progression and really great vocals. That tremolo effect on the guitar is chilling!
Check out my latest song called Mean Miss Teacher
I.G.M. said 1718 days ago (July 15th, 2012)
Nice tune
Simple but impressive.
Good work here.
Check out my latest song called Reflexions
gadzooks said 1718 days ago (July 15th, 2012)
Wings through the Window
Excellent tune! Like the melody ....Lovin' that vibrato on the guitar. Enjoyed your vocals.
Cheers
SG
Check out my latest song called Emoji
Philip18 said 1718 days ago (July 15th, 2012)
Wings
Ominous sort of feel which suits the lyrics. Good guitar sounds. Emotion in the vocal. Good one!
Check out my latest song called Reverie
Charday said 1718 days ago (July 15th, 2012)
So.....
I've listened to numerous posts here, and this is my first comment, yours is the first voice I've heard that really stands out, I'd love to know how you got this sound on your vocal, nice harmonies, well written song with a nice hook, love the tremelo, I really think this song is worth honing, look forward to hearing the finished product. You should post the lyrics, I'd like to see them. My biggest concern is how the hook descends melodically, and seems to be a digression in the melody line, other pats of your melody especially "let me off the hook so easily" sound like a better "hook" climax, so I like the words of the hook, I would suggest you play around with an ascending melody line for it though, with some angst. Take care. Dallas.
Check out my latest song called Payin' The Piper w/Awigze
jobu said 1718 days ago (July 15th, 2012)
Thanks
Thanks for that thorough and well thought out critique. Much appreciated. Here are the lyrics as requested.

The Fly was on the ceiling
My wish was on the floor
But nothing could let me off the hook so easy

I conjured up a feeling
From a place I was before
Where no one could let me off the hook so easy

but I made the call
and I said it all

but I'm getting tired of fitting my wings through the window...
Check out my latest song called Dirty Female
CrazeeFlootGrrl said 1715 days ago (July 18th, 2012)
Very smooth
I love the smooth sound of this that's created through the combination of the voice and guitar. I feel like it could be used in one of those scenes in a movie where the emphasis is on the actions and the song, but no sound from the scene. Like a dramatic scene of some sort. Anyways, nice work!
Check out my latest song called The Way
Daugrin said 1533 days ago (January 16th, 2013)
Off the hook
I would gig with this band.

Daug
Check out my latest song called Clearing in the Forrest of Feeling
Artist Info
Location: United States
send a note

Check out some of my other songs:

Chat
Who's Online
Invisible Members: 0
Visitors: 88