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The clean version of Go Away. :)

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To hell with you and all your lies
You can't just come back and say you think about me all the time
I hate you for how you make me feel
You keep on messing with my feelings and i've had enough

So go away
I don't need you anymore
Just go away
Tonight, tonight

I'll throw it all away
Our friendship means nothing to me anymore
Just go away
Tonight, tonight, tonight

To hell with you, i know you're a player
You've got another thousand guys falling at your feet
You say you care, well why not show it?
Actions speak louder than words and you act like i don't exist

So go away
I don't need you anymore
Just go away
Tonight, tonight

I'll throw it all away
Our friendship means nothing to me anymore
Just go away
Tonight, tonight, tonight

You can't just come back
You can't just hurt me
Like you think you can
I won't let you
No you'll never destroy me, no

So go away
I don't need you anymore
Just go away
Tonight, tonight

I'll throw it all away
Our friendship means nothing to me anymore
Just go away
Tonight, tonight, tonight
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Plays: 131
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Uploaded: Jul 19, 2012 - 11:33:20 AM
Last Updated: Jul 19, 2012 - 11:33:20 AM Last Played: Jul 15, 2017 - 01:45:51 AM
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Soundhound said 1973 days ago (July 19th, 2012)
Nice bed track....
And Vocals...The lyrics are a little unbalanced and it tells in the vocal
when you try to say the words (Our friendship means nothing to me anymore) if you drop the (To Me) it would have the same power in statement but would give you much more control in your vocal.......
And a few other spots as well you could drop a word or 2 balance is the key to a real good vocal & lyric....I know it's a personal statement but it doesn't have to be all about you, because others have lived this feeling as well, I think you would make more of a connection if it were more universal in it's point.....If you get my drift...Clean up the mix and it would be a good radio tune....
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MJReunionNAR said 1973 days ago (July 19th, 2012)
:)
Thank you for your feedback. :)

I was a bit selfish with this song lyrically, i didn't care about making it universal, i just wanted to write about the one person that had made me feel this way and get it off my chest.
I did know i was blocking out some audience from relating with making it less universal lyrically but like i said, that wasn't my goal in the first place.

I do appreciate your feedback and thank you for listening. :)
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Soundhound said 1973 days ago (July 19th, 2012)
That is where....
Some of the best songs come from, that deep emotional place, so do it like you want..It's your thing...
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Songwriterz said 1973 days ago (July 19th, 2012)
Oh my !!!
I LOVE your vocals! So so cool voice.. I'm a fan ! I don't agree with dropping words, I really feel that it makes the song different and unique.
What I could have wished for was more punch in snare and kick drum.. I hope you don't take my comment in the wrong way :) This song with your vocals is radio material if mixed right - wish you all the best with it! Love Heidi
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MJReunionNAR said 1973 days ago (July 19th, 2012)
Thank you!
Thank you so much! :) I'm really glad you enjoyed and thank you for listening. :)

Would you say the song isn't mixed/mastered right then? I'm not very great in that department. Haha. :)
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Songwriterz said 1973 days ago (July 19th, 2012)
Hey :)
Just a follow up on the mixing thing.. basically there are never any right og wrong.. if you produce, mix and release yourself, you can mix it totally as you want.. BUT.. from there to having it played on the radio is another issue, cause they can sure be picky! If you like we can talk some more about this in a private msg, let me know :) Love Heidi
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alackbass said 1973 days ago (July 19th, 2012)
Go Away (Clean)
Still loving the guitars and your vocal. I like the changes you made to the lyrics
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Garni said 1973 days ago (July 19th, 2012)
Go Away
This is amazing! Love it.
As the guys have said here, fix a few minor things and you're on a big radio hit!

G-)
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Philip18 said 1973 days ago (July 20th, 2012)
Go Away
I like the spacey vocal and the ringing guitars. Good one!
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