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Rain Falling (Finished)


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LukeJL

 Genre: Hard Rock

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I tried to make the quality as good as I possibly could in Garageband. If you want, please leave a comment and let me know what you honestly think of this, musically and lyrically :) Thanks! Any suggestions on how to improve are welcome!
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Lyrics
(Verse 1)
Here you are fallen once again
Halo disappeared from your head
Shattered truths so far from belief
Fractured wings can't lift you to me
Watch your trust drift off in the wind
Won't love again knowing the sin
Hurt and beaten you can't find rest
Shut your eyes know I'm by your side

(Pre-Chorus)
Every time you go
It's always the same
Your tired broken heart
Sick of games

(Chorus)
What you see
You can't believe
Blank pages
Don't tell the story
Rain falling
The truth floods through
You should know
It was never you

(Verse 2)
By yourself crying so much pain
Three years ago still nothing changed
Now you're exhausted from it all
I sense you're ready to fall so
Catch your trust blowing in the wind
Bring it back to your heart again
Break the glass that holds you back and
Let me help you to understand

(Pre-Chorus)
Every time you go
It's always the same
Your tired broken heart
Sick of games

(Chorus)

(Bridge)
Rain falls down around you
Let the whole truth shine through
So beautiful you are
Now please know I love you

(Chorus)

(End)
This love I have for you
You're so unbelievable
Song Stats
Hits: 1065
Comments: 11
Fans: 5
Plays: 115
Downloads: 0
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Oct 27, 2012 - 07:26:50 PM
Last Updated: Oct 28, 2012 - 01:42:56 PM Last Played: Feb 21, 2017 - 12:32:57 PM
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Hardware:
BBE distortion pedal, Yamaha Keyboard, PRS SE 245
Software:
Garageband
Comments
alackbass said 1816 days ago (October 27th, 2012)
Rain Falling (Finished)
Great track! All you need is the right singer and you'll have a thoroughly professional sounding production! The heavy guitars are really incredible sounding!
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LukeJL said 1816 days ago (October 27th, 2012)
Thank you so much!
Awesome! Thanks!
Check out my latest song called Rain Falling (Finished)
Char said 1816 days ago (October 27th, 2012)
Some of the passages are very
romantic. Sounds well constructed with nice additions. Thanks.
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LukeJL said 1816 days ago (October 27th, 2012)
I am
Happy you think it sounds well constructed! Thank you for the comment!
Check out my latest song called Rain Falling (Finished)
finkeldink said 1816 days ago (October 27th, 2012)
Great dynamics
Excellent job in garageband.
Everything sounds pretty solid in my monitors.
Good stuff man!
If I could do better I'd comment on how to improve it.
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LukeJL said 1816 days ago (October 27th, 2012)
Great!
I'm glad it sounds good in monitors - all I have is a pair of headphones - I'm really trying here to get the quality right. Thanks!
Check out my latest song called Rain Falling (Finished)
Songwriterz said 1815 days ago (October 28th, 2012)
Awesome
Awesome production - I agree with the others.. get yourself a good singer and you're ready to go ;) I'm really amazed by your talent! Love Heidi
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LukeJL said 1815 days ago (October 28th, 2012)
Thanks!
I'm looking for a singer now. Thank you so much!
Check out my latest song called Rain Falling (Finished)
SylviaD said 1815 days ago (October 28th, 2012)
Heavy metal
Is not a genre I know anything about, so I can't offer any constructive comment about this production. But is it helpful to say that I actually liked listening to this!? :)
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SylviaD said 1815 days ago (October 28th, 2012)
Hard rock
Sorry, I got my genres mixed up....see what I mean? I don't know anything!
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LukeJL said 1815 days ago (October 28th, 2012)
Haha
Glad you liked it! Thanks!
Check out my latest song called Rain Falling (Finished)
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Name: Luke
Location: ME United States
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