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Feelings coming up. Flaws included.
Well, actually I removed the most blaring flaws to the best of my present technical abilities..
Constructive advice and opinion is considered and appreciated - as well as anyone wishing to do anything with this.
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Uploaded: Nov 20, 2012 - 07:07:55 PM
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gadzooks said 1734 days ago (November 21st, 2012)
Where Are You Hiding?
in the intro I feel the first couple of bars feel slightly out of time (guitars right and left) then at about 13 sec in the timing feels right ... very clear recording and beautiful tone you are getting and I love your free form vocals ... lovely melody... lots of feel ... from the heart.
Cheers
SG
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lyzak said 1733 days ago (November 22nd, 2012)
I'm honored
you took the time to listen and comment. Definitely a boost to get your take. Thanks!
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richard13 said 1734 days ago (November 21st, 2012)
I like the art
and I like the music, feelings, flaws and all. My opinion, and I stress that, is that this needs to be a little longer so you can fit in some lyrics. The vocal you have now serves, I think, as a nice introduction to the missing lyrical message of the song. My 2 cents, but I helped myself to a copy as it is ;-) Thanks.
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lyzak said 1733 days ago (November 22nd, 2012)
Thanks.
Your opinions, sir, especially with the vocals and lyrical message, are on the money! (If I didn't consider them that, they'd still be appreciated.) The kind of 'primal-ness,' to the vocal is a small step for me trying to get there.
Thanks for dl! I feel good knowing who does!


Thanks for the listen, and dl. It's a treat to know where these sketches go.
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DJShadowkat said 1732 days ago (November 23rd, 2012)
Me too
Nice art!

DJSK
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J_Gretch said 1734 days ago (November 21st, 2012)
Where Are You Hiding?
Sounds good so far.I have a few at this stage myself.If you need anything specific like a bass line, or some lyrics or something,,,get in touch.
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lyzak said 1733 days ago (November 22nd, 2012)
Will do..
Thanks for the listen and your offer!
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DJShadowkat said 1732 days ago (November 23rd, 2012)
Where are you hiding?
I like this. The guitars are clean and well mixed.

For vocal fun, try AutoTune! I love it. You can do so much with it. I love tikering with the thing. They have a demo that runs in Garageband and Logic:

http://www.antarestech.com/products/auto-tune-evo.shtml

Keep it up. I hear talent here.

DJSK
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lyzak said 1731 days ago (November 24th, 2012)
Glad you listened
Thanks for comments! Autotune sounds interesting.
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oldlibmike said 1731 days ago (November 24th, 2012)
Nice chords
Sounds sort of alternative. The voice is strained in a good way - maybe work on some levels there to mix it in better. Nice guitar work - ditto on maybe the timing but don't overdo it. Some variation is good or it sounds machine like. A little rough around 1:45 timing wise. Love the sound.
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lyzak said 1731 days ago (November 24th, 2012)
Appreciated:
Your comments and sound (both literally and figuratively) advice. Thanks!
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egobandit said 1725 days ago (November 30th, 2012)
it flashes by
really trippy the splicing adds such an odd effect but in the end it works
very cool!
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Jscott said 1724 days ago (December 1st, 2012)
great!
A very nice open piece, a lot of feeling in here.
Try using a click track when recording it will help you keep things in time
thanks for sharing!
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PaulaMunk said 1705 days ago (December 20th, 2012)
It sounds as if
if you've got the feeling of frustration or confusion and that you are asking questions. I'm having some problems with a scratchy throat. I don't know if you're working with that obstacle, as well. Some great singers made that work. I might be able to come up with some lyrics. I'll listen a few more times. It is a pretty tune. Thanks.
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PaulaMunk said 1266 days ago (March 5th, 2014)
I did post
a song, with your inspiration. I had Ralph, the baritone chipmunk, sing. I intend to sing it as Char. This time, I'll try to use some of your music but I'm pretty awful at working with music. So, it will be a demo. with a little luck, we might have a song. I'll let you know. Thanks.
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Philip18 said 1704 days ago (December 21st, 2012)
Where are you hiding
I like the tone of the guitars a lot. Easy chord progression. To me it does has a "work in progress" feel, with the guitars sometimes a touch out of sync. Plenty of room for an emotional set of lyrics here. Thanks for sharing this!
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