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This is a collaboration between myself and **115**. He did the music. The words, artwork, and mix are mine. cjhoose had nothing to do with this.
I wrote this poem 17 years ago when I was 17. It was inspired by a Police song and nearly got me kicked out of one high school. It did get me in the drama club at a second and my English teacher pinned it up on the bulletin board, so I guess someone liked it.
I wrote this poem 17 years ago when I was 17. It was inspired by a Police song and nearly got me kicked out of one high school. It did get me in the drama club at a second and my English teacher pinned it up on the bulletin board, so I guess someone liked it.
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Lyrics
i had heartbreak every day
since you were kind enough
to come my way
i hated you
you stupid bitch
i wished i could have killed you
and made you dead
but i loved you much too much
to put a bullet through your
fucking head
i loved to love you
when you were alive and well
even though you were too stupid to
tell
i was shocked completely
when you were considerate for the first time
and just up and died
you had a private funeral
in my basement
no one but me mourned
no one but me cried
I didn't bury you
no i'd never do that
i hid you where your soul was born
my freezer
i take you out of your cold confines
when i'm feeling sad and gray
death did so much for our relationship
you no longer protest when i have you
my way
even though your lips are
stiff and blue
rest assured i still love you
and as i hold you and kiss your pallid cold face
i find i still love loving you
so please oh please return my embrace
and as we in death play our little love games
i realize you moved so seldom in life
it is almost exactly the same
since you were kind enough
to come my way
i hated you
you stupid bitch
i wished i could have killed you
and made you dead
but i loved you much too much
to put a bullet through your
fucking head
i loved to love you
when you were alive and well
even though you were too stupid to
tell
i was shocked completely
when you were considerate for the first time
and just up and died
you had a private funeral
in my basement
no one but me mourned
no one but me cried
I didn't bury you
no i'd never do that
i hid you where your soul was born
my freezer
i take you out of your cold confines
when i'm feeling sad and gray
death did so much for our relationship
you no longer protest when i have you
my way
even though your lips are
stiff and blue
rest assured i still love you
and as i hold you and kiss your pallid cold face
i find i still love loving you
so please oh please return my embrace
and as we in death play our little love games
i realize you moved so seldom in life
it is almost exactly the same
















UncleSamwich
Crazy, young love...
17 was as interesting and memorable as this piece.
I also was thinking that this was a better song to use
to the last dance with mary jane video.
I was also thinking about the things that got me
kicked out of school.
In general you got me thinking, and that;s impressive
in and of itself. Nice job.
The performance was raw, and the whole thing really
emminated '17' perfectly. Alice Cooper's 18 was
child's play compared to this.