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faultysynapse

 Genre: Rock
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This song is about is about prison
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Lyrics
I dream away to pass the time,Search for words and hope they rhyme,dig through my shit but never find,what Im looking for.I fold my clothes try and read my books caych my eye,close the door to avoid the looks,From strangers who might catch my eye I seem normal but Im dead inside......But inside Im not the same as I was before ,Been changed by pad locks and slammin doors you cant save me so dont even waste your time believe me I dont wanna live this life.
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Hits: 1311
Comments: 14
Fans: 12
Plays: 123
Downloads: 29
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Nov 05, 2013 - 02:45:30 PM
Last Updated: Nov 11, 2013 - 08:54:17 PM Last Played: Jan 10, 2017 - 12:34:11 AM
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FEEL said 1384 days ago (November 6th, 2013)
Rock'n tune
I like the progression and it has a driving feel to it. Fitting lyrics that explain a regretful situation. Strategic break and then into the acoustic, Nice. Vocals are strong and the band sounds great.
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faultysynapse said 1381 days ago (November 9th, 2013)
Rock n tune
Thanks feel.Glad you stopped by.This is the first song wrote completely through myself,so it has a special meaning to me.Im pleased you like it.
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Moviz said 1384 days ago (November 6th, 2013)
After reading
your piece in the forum, I thought I'd better come along and listen to you and I've listened to your last three including this one and enjoyed them. Nice sound and style on guitar and very good lyrics which you get over well in your vocals; plenty of raw emotion which I like. Some people have a beautiful voice, but don't sing well, but I'm sure you'll agree your's isn't the most 'beautiful', but you can really sing; emotion is the key and that's where you win. I think your vocals suit the style of song you sing and that's fine by me, regards M
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faultysynapse said 1381 days ago (November 9th, 2013)
After reading
Thanks for checkin me out and for reading the forum post.I am in total agreement that I dont have the greatest voice.I pride myself on my songwriting and make up for my lack of vocal range by putting on a hell of a live show...Thanks again for the listen
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edpdx said 1382 days ago (November 8th, 2013)
Outside!
Hey,

Welome to MJ! I see a lot of potential in your voice. A few shouts here and there would go nice with this song. Let it rip bro!

edpdx
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faultysynapse said 1381 days ago (November 9th, 2013)
Outside
Thanks for the listen.Yeah not alot of vocal dynamics in this one.I like to yell whenever I get a chance but didnt feel it in this one.Check out Break Me or Sick i yell like hell bro..:)
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egobandit said 1381 days ago (November 8th, 2013)
normal but dead inside
reflective, you guys are real tight, like when it breaks down and the acoustic? comes in, steady and moving I thought it moght explode but I like that you guys kept it subdued btw welcome to MJ's
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faultysynapse said 1381 days ago (November 9th, 2013)
normal but dead inside
Whats up ego...Yeah I was diggin deep,I try and keep my music very open and honest and thats where I was at the time,"dead inside".Thank for giving me your time on this and all the other songs you've listened to.
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alackbass said 1381 days ago (November 9th, 2013)
Inside
Strong track. Excellent arrangement and production.
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faultysynapse said 1381 days ago (November 9th, 2013)
Inside
Thanks man.
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DeputyDoofy said 1380 days ago (November 10th, 2013)
Ok. Here I am.
I don't generally have much to offer in the way of criticism (since my 'expertise' begins and ends with loop fun), but what I'm about to say kind of reflects edpdx's comments. Shouting or bringing your voice up to "rock level" during those last lines would be awesome. Otherwise, this is high quality stuff I'd expect to hear on the radio.
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faultysynapse said 1380 days ago (November 10th, 2013)
Deputy..
Yeah I agree with both of you.I just didnt feel the right part to do that in,I mean within the context of the song.To be honest I dont like my vocals at several points in this song especially the bridge.I like the acoustic break alot but couldnt explode the way you are talking about in the end which to me made it anticlimatic to me as well.This one is the genesis of my music writing...1st song completely chords,dynamics and lyrics.My later songs I found a little more contrast.Thank you for your critique.
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magnatone said 1379 days ago (November 11th, 2013)
Inside
Driving intensity with terrific lyrics. It'd be nice if you would post your lyrics as well as identify band members and who's playing what (where applicable!) Cool and creative breaks - Welcome to MJ!
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magnatone said 1376 days ago (November 14th, 2013)
doh!
the lyrics are right there in front of my face!
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