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A new song i've done with the band, it's just a demo and needs re-recording etc but i still thought i'd share it anyway.

Thank you for listening & commenting :) much appreciated!
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So here you go again you've given up
& honestly, i don't even care
So go ahead, i dare you, call my bluff
& you will see that i won't be there

So you never say what's on your mind
Well then i'll tell you what's on mine

That i will fly, high above the sky
& you will die, 'cause you NEVER try
& if you always run before you learn to crawl
Then i'll watch you fall, 'cause i gave my all

"We're bad for each other but we're not good enough for anyone else"
That's what you said, but i'm too good for you
And if you want your space then you can have it
For eternity, 'cause you know we're through

So you never say what's on your mind
Well then i'll tell you what's on mine

That i will fly, high above the sky
& you will die, 'cause you NEVER try
& if you always run before you learn to crawl
Then i'll watch you fall, 'cause i gave my all

So i will fly, high above the sky
& you will die, 'cause you NEVER try
& if you always run before you learn to crawl
Then i'll watch you fall, 'cause you're on your own

You're on your own x4
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Uploaded: Mar 03, 2014 - 03:02:22 AM
Last Updated: Mar 03, 2014 - 03:04:00 AM Last Played: Mar 19, 2017 - 08:42:54 AM
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TommyBlueBoy said 1123 days ago (March 3rd, 2014)
Nice
Niall, you are off to a great start with this song; this is a fine piece of "power pop". My only bit of constructive criticism (and take my free advice for what it's worth) would be this: the verses are almost too low for you, so you are just a bit out of tune at times. So, if you are going to work on this some more, perhaps you can concentrate on this. Perhaps all you need is a bit more breath support.
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MJReunionNAR said 1123 days ago (March 3rd, 2014)
Thank you very much!
I thought the same with the verses, we only did this song in two vocal takes though & it's very freshly done so it's bound to change with time :) Thank you for listening & your feedback, much appreciated :)
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davisamerica said 1123 days ago (March 3rd, 2014)
gomez
...reminds me a bit of... a very sincere complement...
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PaulaMunk said 1122 days ago (March 4th, 2014)
Hi Niall,
nice song.
Even when it is your own song, you have to learn it. It always finds its way. Nice to see you. Thanks.


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PaulaMunk said 1122 days ago (March 4th, 2014)
Hi Niall,
nice song.
Even when it is your own song, you have to learn it. It always finds its way. Nice to see you. Thanks.


Check out my latest song called O, Shenandoah
kingbee said 1121 days ago (March 5th, 2014)
learning to crawl
Cracking, catchy power pop song.
Ash, Foo Fighters feel to it.
Just a few tweaks on the mix.
Maybe just re-do the verse vocals again to have confidence on phrasing and just a touch of reverb.
I think the vocals for the chorus are fine.
If you've not double tracked guitars already maybe try that and pan them wide either side and up in the mix a touch to give the mix a bit more 'body'
If you can, try to split the drum tracks .
The kick is fine. Just maybe a bit of reverb on the snare to give it a bit more impact and ring.
Apart from that, a really cracking track.
Good stuff
cheers
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Daniel said 1115 days ago (March 11th, 2014)
nice tune.
I like the mix and vocals.
Kinda makes me feel happy!
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Name: Niall
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Hi i'm Niall and i'm 22. I originally joined Macjams in 2007. Remix of my song "In Love" done by Mr Turtle: http://www.macjams.com/song/44781... [see more]

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