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While I Bleed w/Raven


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Garni

 Genre: Gothic Rock

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‘While I Bleed’ is another collaboration that I have done with the powerful and beautiful vocals of Raven

The original song that Ravens did is here
http://www.kompoz.com/music/collaboration/78527

And with her kind permission allowed me to give this, like I did with our previous song ‘Fading’, some epicness (is that a word?) and a powerful feel.

Raven: Vocals/Lyrics
Garni: Drums, Bass, Guitar, Synths and Mix
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Lyrics
WHILE I BLEED
Lyrics by Dani A (Raven 2012)
Music by Gerald G (Garni 2014)

Tainted wine how the memories stain
Condescending accusations
Only I took the blame
Pictures of a dying rose
Harbouring inside my head.

Separated from a love I once knew
Emancipated recollections
How was I such a fool?
To give you all I had inside
Now a hollow shell remains.

Close your eyes while I weep
Turn your back when I speak
Walk away while I bleed
Crucified by your lies
Pierce my soul as I cry
Fill your need while I bleed.

Shamed to say
My hands are soiled and scarred
For just one night would I give my life,
To be where you are?
Silhouettes of broken dreams
Dance beside me as you haunt my sleep.

But I can’t pretend that things
Will ever be the same
Guardian angel where you been?
Cause I need someone to blame
I’m trapped inside this cage
When will someone come and rescue me?

(break)

Close your eyes while
I weep
Turn your back when I speak
Walk away while I bleed
Crucified by your lies
Pierce my soul as I cry
Fill your need while I bleed.

(repeat)

Fermenting poison in my veins
Bound by your unrelenting chains
Got to break free
Fill your need while I bleed.

Cold blackened heart
You’re in my blood
Rip through my skin till I come undone
Got to break free
Fill your need while I bleed.
Song Stats
Hits: 1356
Comments: 26
Fans: 18
Plays: 146
Downloads: 0
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Mar 06, 2014 - 10:35:43 PM
Last Updated: Sep 29, 2014 - 10:02:47 AM Last Played: Apr 29, 2017 - 05:49:26 PM
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Hardware:
Axiom 61, M-Audio Trigger Finger, Ibanez Gio Guitar and a Kids Toy Piano.
Software:
Kontakt, Alchemy, Trilion, Omnisphere, Linplug Plugins and Logic Pro X
Comments
michaeljayklein said 1150 days ago (March 6th, 2014)
While I Bleed
This is a terrific, moody and evocative song (some powerful lyrics)and Impsie, well you know how much I love that voice; you are just something else I tell's ya! Great arrangement from Garni Baby brings this home with flying colours. Thanks you two!
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Garni said 1150 days ago (March 6th, 2014)
Thank you MJK
Thank you for calling by and leaving us a wonderful comment, it is really appreciated.

G-)
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jiguma said 1150 days ago (March 7th, 2014)
Very nice!
You couldn't do much better than work with Dani on a collab or two Gerald. This sounds great on my iPad - looking forward to getting time to listen on the "Big Mac".
"Epic" indeed.
Cheers,
Neil
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Garni said 1150 days ago (March 7th, 2014)
Cheers Neil
Thank you for calling by and taking a listen, glad you enjoyed. Yeah to get the real feel of this good monitors or headphones are the go.
Dani is an exceptional person to work with, I have worked with her a few times years ago and it's only recently I've reacquainted with her again, and she has let me use some of her vocal stems to produce these latest pieces of work.

G-)
Check out my latest song called Opposites Attract feat. Northpoint
RAVENS said 1150 days ago (March 7th, 2014)
Thank you!
Sounds awesome, Garni - your music arrangement is fab.

Thank you to everyone who comments/listens - it's very much appreciated. :)
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Garni said 1150 days ago (March 7th, 2014)
Don't thank me
I'm the one who should be thanking you for allowing me to work with your amazing vocals.
Glad you like what I did Dani :)

G-)
Check out my latest song called Opposites Attract feat. Northpoint
Outtaorbit said 1149 days ago (March 7th, 2014)
Sweetness
Yes sir
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Garni said 1149 days ago (March 7th, 2014)
Cheers Outtaorbit
Thanks for dropping in

G-)
Check out my latest song called Opposites Attract feat. Northpoint
Charday said 1149 days ago (March 7th, 2014)
Hey Gerald
big fan of ravens voice, you did a great job as usual, always a pleasure! Jd.
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Garni said 1149 days ago (March 7th, 2014)
Hi JD
Yeah I am a big fan of Dani's voice too. I am glad you enjoyed what we did, it is much appreciated mate

G-)
Check out my latest song called Opposites Attract feat. Northpoint
PeterB7858 said 1149 days ago (March 8th, 2014)
While I Bleed w/Raven
An emotional tour de force, Dani. The layered vocal work is outstanding. Again, Gerald, you have really hit the sweet spot with your arrangement. It builds so well. A fine, fine collaboration. Thanks to you both. Regards, Peter.
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Garni said 1149 days ago (March 8th, 2014)
Thank you Peter
Glad you enjoyed this piece. Yes, Dani's vocals express lots of emotion here and its always an honour to work with her. Thanks for the support mate

G-)
Check out my latest song called Opposites Attract feat. Northpoint
Daugrin said 1148 days ago (March 8th, 2014)
Girlie Girl
The music supports the girl perfectly. I think I want to compress her main vocals some more... Just a bit too far into the track to my ears, the group vocals work just right.
Thank you for sharing your work with us. You guys always raise the bar!

Daug
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Garni said 1148 days ago (March 8th, 2014)
Thank you Daugrin
Appreciate your input and I will take that onboard when I come to remix some of my work later for an album that I ideally would like to get out there one day :)
Glad you enjoy our work :)

G-)
Check out my latest song called Opposites Attract feat. Northpoint
Vic Holman said 1148 days ago (March 8th, 2014)
powerful and beautiful vocals
you sure got that right.

Very captivating...love the tension and drama.
perfect music track Gerald. and outstanding vocals Dani
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Garni said 1148 days ago (March 9th, 2014)
Thank you Vic
Glad you enjoyed this, thanks for calling by and having a listen, we both appreciate that very much

G-)
Check out my latest song called Opposites Attract feat. Northpoint
Marino_Experiment said 1148 days ago (March 9th, 2014)
While I Bleed w/Raven
Very cool vocals and music. Dark and haunting performance, much enjoyed!
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Garni said 1147 days ago (March 9th, 2014)
Thank you Marino
Glad you enjoyed thanks for calling in

G-)
Check out my latest song called Opposites Attract feat. Northpoint
groovehounds said 1148 days ago (March 9th, 2014)
While I Bleed w/Raven
This is a great track! Raven's voice is warm and smooth and the music is a perfect fit. Strong stuff .... you two should continue collaborating.
Cheers
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Garni said 1147 days ago (March 9th, 2014)
Cheers Groovehound
Thank you very much in what you say, yeah I hope to do a few more of these in future with Dani, she is wonderful to work with and I get a lot of satisfaction when her vocals are used on my work

G-)
Check out my latest song called Opposites Attract feat. Northpoint
grah3am said 1148 days ago (March 9th, 2014)
Terrific
I bet you were really chuffed when you finished the master of this.
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Garni said 1147 days ago (March 9th, 2014)
Hi Grah3am
Yeah I was chuffed producing this piece, I am happy with the result, a few tweaks hear and there for a final master I guess. Glad you enjoyed this joint piece of work and thank you for calling by.

G-)
Check out my latest song called Opposites Attract feat. Northpoint
davisamerica said 1145 days ago (March 12th, 2014)
would have
downloaded if i could ... sweet
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Garni said 1145 days ago (March 12th, 2014)
Hi Davis
Glad you enjoyed this

G-)
Check out my latest song called Opposites Attract feat. Northpoint
Franciscus_Henri said 1143 days ago (March 13th, 2014)
just back from Geelong
came home to this splendid music . beautifully done.
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Garni said 1143 days ago (March 13th, 2014)
Hi Franciscus
Oh you should of dropped in, I live in Geelong :)
Glad you enjoyed this and thanks for taking a listen

G-)
Check out my latest song called Opposites Attract feat. Northpoint
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Gothic rock evolved out of post punk during the late 1970s. Originally considered just a label for a small handful of punk rock/post punk bands, goth only began to be defined as a separate movement in 1981. While most punk bands focused on aggressive

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