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Using Dani's vocal stems with her kind permission from the following song

'What If - Goodbye'
http://www.kompoz.com/music/collaboration/86889

I've composed this with a darker mood in mind, saying goodbye is a sad time right :(

Ravens: Vocals/Lyrics
Garni: Music/Mix
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Lyrics
WHAT IF... GOODBYE
Vocals/Lyrics by Ravens 2013
Music by Garni 2014

What if, I could trap your fears in a jar
What if, you could hear my cries from afar
What if, we could tattoo a smile on our face
What if, I could find the right life to trace
What if, – you could be here
What if, we could find solace in spite of our tears
What if, I could pick roses and bypass your thorns

What if, you push me away
What if, I ask you to stay
What if, we finally say…Goodbye.

What if, you would lie to cover your truth
What if, I would kindly loosen the noose
What if, we would pretend to be finding our way
What if, you would understand me someday
What if, - I give you space
What if, we live the moment, relax and embrace
What if, you would kneel down and bleed on my grave

What if, I’d pushed you away
What if, you’d asked me to stay
What if, we finally say… Goodbye.
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Comments: 38
Fans: 21
Plays: 53
Downloads: 0
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Uploaded: May 10, 2014 - 05:49:22 AM
Last Updated: Sep 29, 2014 - 10:01:48 AM Last Played: May 26, 2017 - 09:40:32 PM
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Comments
Skean said 1293 days ago (May 10th, 2014)
What?
You're living us? anyway you two have done a very enjoyable song, thanks a lot for sharing, peace.
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Garni said 1293 days ago (May 10th, 2014)
LOL Kenta
No, not yet, possibly one day :)
Thanks for taking a listen and glad you enjoyed.

G-)
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Narad said 1293 days ago (May 10th, 2014)
Goodbye
Ravens is really one of the best singers here and your music accompanies her marvelously.
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Garni said 1293 days ago (May 10th, 2014)
Thank you Harald
Yeah, I agree with you, her voice is amazing and it is always wonderful to work with her. She is always supportive in what I do too. Thank you for the visit and glad you liked this.

G-)
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PeterB7858 said 1292 days ago (May 10th, 2014)
Goodbye w/Ravens
A seamless collaboration of two fine musical talents, Gerald. Dani sounds just great and I really like her subtle harmonies. The piano and bass sit so nicely in the mix. Fine work. Thanks, Peter.
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Garni said 1292 days ago (May 11th, 2014)
Thank you Peter
Wonderful words you have written here, means a lot what you say here. Glad you liked this mate

G-)
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Vic Holman said 1292 days ago (May 10th, 2014)
captivating
dani's vocal work is always a pleasure to hear. and great backing gerald. it comes off as being planned from the very inception of the creation of the song
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Garni said 1292 days ago (May 11th, 2014)
Hi Vic
Yes, Dani's vocals are a joy to hear and I am thrilled to be able to use her vocals in the past few months in my work. Glad you enjoyed this Vic

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RAVENS said 1292 days ago (May 10th, 2014)
Awesome
You really did a terrific job, Garni. It's always so interesting to hear what others do with my vocal seps - you never disappoint. :)

Thank you everyone, for your wonderful comments! :)
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Garni said 1292 days ago (May 11th, 2014)
Hi Dani :)
I like reading what you say here, thank you so much for allowing me to use your vocals.
I feel honoured to have your stamp of approval on this.

G-)
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gadzooks said 1292 days ago (May 11th, 2014)
Goodbye w/Ravens
Another excellent job of combining Ravens wonderful singing with your music. A perfect mix in my opinion. I like the bass sound against the kick ... nicely composed music. A very dreamy sounding melody.
Cheers
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Garni said 1292 days ago (May 11th, 2014)
Thank you Stan
Appreciate it very much you taking a listen to this.
The bass is heavily quantised to the kick in this song, while everything floats around it a bit looser.
Glad you enjoyed it.

G-)
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grah3am said 1291 days ago (May 11th, 2014)
Stellar
vocals and production. Dark mood much appreciated here.
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Garni said 1291 days ago (May 12th, 2014)
Thank you Grah3am
Glad you enjoyed this. Appreciate you calling by

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JazzIsTvRicky said 1290 days ago (May 12th, 2014)
My Mate..
Garni your productions are always filled with the Poetry od composition and supreme Production..Sing it My Lady..

JazzIs, cool
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Garni said 1290 days ago (May 12th, 2014)
Hi JazzIs
Thank you so much for the listen it is greatly appreciated my friend
And your words are so kind too

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Soundhound said 1290 days ago (May 12th, 2014)
Her voice..
Will just about make anything, she sings sound good...
And this is outstanding, track and mix you did well
putting this together..

Nice 1....
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Garni said 1290 days ago (May 12th, 2014)
Hi Soundhound
Yes Dani's vocals are exceptional and that is enough to make any production shine.
Glad you liked this and your words are verity kind and supportive, thank you!

G-)
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paul f. page said 1290 days ago (May 12th, 2014)
Expressive vocals...
Wish I had the lyrics since my ability to decipher words through music is sadly going south...
Such a sad song that is consistently powerful in production with that strong bass and percussion backing. It is almost like a mourning mantra with the two chords repeating in an endless loop. Sort of hypnotic. (Please post the lyrics.) The whole song is mixed so well, too, evidence that you have such complete control of your musical environment. Solid in every way.
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Garni said 1290 days ago (May 12th, 2014)
Hello Paul
Thank you very much in what you say, it means a lot reading your very kind and warm comment.
I will of course post the lyrics, when I get hold of them. I try my best in mixing and am always learning with everything I do and the feedback I get as well.

G-)
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KCsGROOVE said 1289 days ago (May 13th, 2014)
goodbye
dark, but beautiful, Gerald
Good to hear Dani :-) lots of emotion in your voice
very nice warm mix
good collab!
KC
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Garni said 1288 days ago (May 15th, 2014)
Thanks Cees
Nice of you to take a listen and glad you enjoyed mate

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RAVENS said 1289 days ago (May 13th, 2014)
Thank You
A huge thank you to everyone who commented/liked the song, it's so appreciated. I miss ya'll. :)
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Garni said 1288 days ago (May 15th, 2014)
Ditto what she says
:)
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magnatone said 1289 days ago (May 14th, 2014)
Goodbye
what an incredible team - Gerald/Dani, doing total justice to a tender subject. thanks to you both for this exceptional treat!
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Garni said 1288 days ago (May 15th, 2014)
Hi Karen
Nice to see you, thanks for the visit glad you enjoyed this.
very nice words you say here, we both appreciate it.

G-)
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FEEL said 1289 days ago (May 14th, 2014)
You can't go wrong with Dani on vocals
Nice composition, it has a lot of emotion through out. Fine job on the mix. Enjoyed!
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Garni said 1288 days ago (May 15th, 2014)
Hi FEEL
Yeah I agree with you Dani's vocals are exceptional and works so nicely with this piece.
Glad you enjoyed, thank you

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Warren Smith said 1288 days ago (May 14th, 2014)
Goodbye
A dark, sad duet nicely executed.

I like that line "What if you would lie to cover up your truth." It twists around with intractable pretzel logic. Nice writing.
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Garni said 1288 days ago (May 15th, 2014)
Hi Warren
This song was written by Dani, using another song that I had nothing to do with originally, I asked Dani for permission to use her vocal stems on this piece I composed. So its by chance really that I was able to match up the song. Dani's lyrics in this are wonderful as with a lot of her other work and her delivery is breathtakingly good. Glad you enjoyed

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chikoppi said 1288 days ago (May 15th, 2014)
Variation
Great piece. Where the lyrical repetition might have been monotonous you turn it into a strength by constantly varying where the common phrase falls. Sometimes "what if" is a lead-in on 4, sometimes it follows the downbeat on 2, sometimes it appears unexpectedly on 3. It works quite effectively to keep teasing my ear forward. Clever!
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Garni said 1288 days ago (May 15th, 2014)
Hi Chikoppi
I can't take credit for any cleverness lyrics wise from this song as it belongs to Dani, I merely used her vocal stems to piece together. So it is by chance really you are hearing what you are.
Thank you for stopping by and checking this out, and glad you enjoyed.

G-)
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Philip18 said 1286 days ago (May 16th, 2014)
Goobye
Dani's voice is always good to listen to, and you've wrapped it up in a beautiful arrangement, Gerald. Excellent work!
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Garni said 1283 days ago (May 20th, 2014)
Hi Philip
Thank you very much for the listen and comment, yeah never tired of Dani's voice EVER!!
Glad you enjoyed

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Cheeto said 1286 days ago (May 16th, 2014)
Simply put...AMAZING!!
Wow! I was blown away by this song! Bravo!! Most excellent song indeed.
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Garni said 1283 days ago (May 20th, 2014)
Hi Cheeto
Thank you so very much for your wonderful comment, it is very much appreciated by us.
Glad you enjoyed it.

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LisaHawbaker said 1282 days ago (May 20th, 2014)
Awesome job
from you both. Music is a great fit and vocals are great.
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Garni said 1281 days ago (May 22nd, 2014)
Thank you Lisa
Thank you for calling in it is much appreciated.
Glad you like :)

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