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Wanna Be The First To Say That I Love You


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A Love Song
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Uploaded: Aug 24, 2014 - 04:59:08 PM
Last Updated: Aug 24, 2014 - 05:02:19 PM Last Played: Feb 21, 2017 - 01:29:57 PM
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Daugrin said 1008 days ago (August 24th, 2014)
First To Say
Paul Stewkey of Nazz comes to mind. That's a good thing...Could I get a middle eight that draws something about the lady into the scene?
The intro could have used a hook, those chords had a nice rhythm, the vocal inflection adopted in the chorus played on a synth? Maybe that riff with strings?
Enjoyed this one. Thanks for sharing your talents with us here.

Daug

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PeterB7858 said 1007 days ago (August 25th, 2014)
The First To Say That I Love You
Like the sound bed that the warm vocals sit in. Agree with Daug re the possible inclusion of a section that breaks out of the mould a bit to add interest and variation. Thanks, Peter.
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Charday said 1007 days ago (August 25th, 2014)
Hey Billy!
This is interesting, I think it's a good idea that needs development, your vocals are a little flat, maybe re-do them or touch them up with auto tune which might sound really cool. Jd.
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Name: Billy Attwell
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