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Untitled Demo 1 (19th September 2011)


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obbster

 Genre: Rock
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There are so many fragments of songs, and barely written dirges that litter my iTunes library and it occurred me that it might be interesting to post some of this unfinished stuff to let people have a listen.

Some of this stuff will probably never get finished and some might end up being the basis for something else entirely.

Anyway i am going to post some of this stuff and this song is probably the most complete out of the bunch. It's almost there but it just seemed to lack something and I could never manage to figure it out.
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Lyrics
I'm the piece that moves you
The part without a name
Broken piece that moves you
Torn between fault and blame

i have a voice
i have one life
i gave it all but you want more

just one more step
thats all you need
ill catch you if you ask me too

How do we know we're going to be
All of the things you promise me
And even when you can't follow me
We can kiss and tell

i have a voice
i have one life
i gave it all but you want more

just one more step
thats all you need
ill catch you if you ask me too
Song Stats
Hits: 488
Comments: 1
Fans: 2
Plays: 28
Downloads: 15
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Sep 05, 2014 - 10:43:29 AM
Last Updated: Sep 05, 2014 - 10:43:29 AM Last Played: Feb 21, 2017 - 01:55:32 PM
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MacBook Pro Late 2013 2.7 i7
Software:
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johnwhitehead said 964 days ago (September 6th, 2014)
Demo
I dig your singing, man. You have a nice feel for the pop ballad. The big distorted guitar got a little tiresome. At about 1:31 it would be cool to go a simple acoustic strumming or clean piano under the chorus, then you could build it up again on the ride out.
Check out my latest song called Wandering Blues
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