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Deadline [Rough Demo]


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Aemyn

 Genre: Hip Hop-Rap
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Here's a draft of a song I'm working on at the moment.

The vocals are essentially a scratch track until my audio interface arrives this week. Any recommendations on what I can add to the instrumental (guitar? violin? synth?)

Cheers
.aemyn.
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Uploaded: Sep 22, 2014 - 07:05:00 AM
Last Updated: Sep 22, 2014 - 07:05:00 AM Last Played: May 21, 2017 - 02:25:24 AM
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Daugrin said 1032 days ago (September 22nd, 2014)
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The chorus is sublime. That vocal is the hook for a great experience.
As usual rap fails, just somebody talking, in a sense, anything new is not said, but is implied. To break out, I would suggest, abandon the current scripts. These are the meme's and theme's that dominate the rap genre. Throw out that world view and adopt another. Even if it is simply for the purpose of the art. Transcend the tradition? The chorus is the place to start.

Daug
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smokey bacon jnr said 1015 days ago (October 9th, 2014)
Reminds me...
a bit of System of a Down, but without the metal! Maybe it needs a bit of heavy guitar in the mix - heavy muted chugging guitar. I don't mind the rap, sounds good to me.
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Char said 996 days ago (October 29th, 2014)
You sound
good. Maybe, punch it up with more beat....? I don't know much about this kind of stuff. I like the more lyrical singing parts. Thanks.

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Name: Aemyn Zephyr Connolly
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