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Milene


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Moses

 Genre: Acoustic
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Work in progress as are all my more recent submissions. I hope you enjoy, kinda like this one :-)
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Lyrics
I remember this one
Less than a year ago
Kiss by the airport doors
The year they take to close
On a plan back to her life she goes

I remember this one
Where I fight the letting go
And floods of memories
That only we know
On a plane, on and on it goes

I don't wanna see her walk away again
I don't want a last time that I see her sweet sweet face
I don't want to lose my new best friend
Then we turned and walked away

Won't be forgetting this one
Where I fight lost love's ghost
And never quite believed
Never got too close
Because she'd get on that plane, back to the life she chose

Chorus

Can I believe again?
Do you believe again?

Chorus
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Comments: 8
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Plays: 44
Downloads: 6

Uploaded: Jun 25, 2015 - 01:58:24 PM
Last Updated: Jun 25, 2015 - 01:58:24 PM Last Played: Mar 21, 2017 - 08:55:08 PM
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Comments
Philip18 said 642 days ago (June 27th, 2015)
Milene
Pretty guitar playing and plaintive vocal. As your comment suggests, there's more that could be done with the production. Good structure.
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Moses said 636 days ago (July 3rd, 2015)
thanks
Thanks for your feedback and for listening
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MarkHolbrook said 640 days ago (June 29th, 2015)
Yes
I'd love to see you develop this further! Cool as it is but could really come alive with a little TLC.
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Moses said 636 days ago (July 3rd, 2015)
thanks Mark
appreciate the encouragement to put a little more work into it!
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Warren Smith said 638 days ago (July 1st, 2015)
Coming and going nowhere
The airport goodbye. There should be a separate genre for this theme : )

I think it works as a solo instrument performance, but in my mind I also can hear a fuller treatment.
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Moses said 636 days ago (July 3rd, 2015)
thanks Warren
I hear the fuller treatment too, I have some ideas :-)
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tmcfate said 637 days ago (July 2nd, 2015)
great
story. I think that if you kept it as a solo performance you could be dynamic with the guitar playing and go softer in spots. Just a little Eq would help the vocal sit in the mix better. I really think this has legs that you can run with.. nice
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Moses said 636 days ago (July 3rd, 2015)
thanks tmc
thanks for the tip on eq for the vocals, I've never messed with eq on vocals before, only instruments. Yes I have some ideas and seems like everyone is encouraging a "fuller treatment" which I hear some specific things for. Thanks for taking the time to listen and give your feedback
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