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A Song of My Pain


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sewer rod

 Genre: Rock
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Kind of a rough draft, I like it though. (no bass) I listed it as rock, don't know what else it would be, a little more mellow than my usual. Enjoy
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I will sing you a song of my pain
As these scars have opened up again
Seems I've been damned, damned from the start
The daily struggles tearin' me apart

Help me if you can
Help me when you can

I've discovered my hope is a lie
It's as empty as I feel inside
My heart dead weight- Desire's quicksand
No matter how loud I yell, you'll never understand

Won't you help me if you can?
Why won't you help me when you can?

I will sing you a song of my pain
Even though I know it's all in vain
One step forward, come meet me half way
Oh won't you listen, listen when I say

Won't you help me if you can?
Why won't you help me when you can?
Won't you help me if you can?
Why don't you help me when you can?

Despite it all, a fire burns inside
I want this emptiness to be a lie
My heart's been crippled, only love will mend
If I yell at the top of my lungs will you understand?

Won't you help me if you can?
Why won't you help me when you can?
Won't you help me if you can?
Why don't you help me when you can?
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Uploaded: Jul 29, 2016 - 08:07:01 AM
Last Updated: Jul 29, 2016 - 08:07:01 AM Last Played: Mar 14, 2017 - 02:36:50 AM
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Warren Smith said 292 days ago (August 9th, 2016)
Life in the less fast lane
Yelling at the tops of your lungs won't lead to understanding .. but this whisper (well, it's a whisper compared to your more thunderous works) might do it : )

This is a catchy tune worth developing. A bass will add weight.
Check out my latest song called Brand New Day
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Name: Jay Rivenburgh
Location: Scotia N.Y. U.S.A,
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