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Crossing the Delaware


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sewer rod

 Genre: Acoustic Rock
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Vince and I
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Uploaded: Sep 24, 2016 - 01:18:25 PM
Last Updated: Sep 24, 2016 - 01:18:25 PM Last Played: Mar 18, 2017 - 08:19:49 AM
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Daugrin said 305 days ago (September 24th, 2016)
Pop song shock!
Wow, a kinda pop song.
The vocals are great. Suggestions? Buss off the top end and saturate those highs a bit, mix that back into the center. The vocal will "pop".
The chorus form needs a bass line under it, and needs a cleaner mix. The writing is strong, just needs better execution.
This alt power pop is a good genre for you and imho, a much better use of your time and considerable talents, then say, the dark screamo stuff with Mumbles.

Daug
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musicmarket said 305 days ago (September 24th, 2016)
Such songs have become rare ...
That's a very good song! I like the "spontaneity", the emotion .... It is rough and it is wonderful !!! Olaf
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Moviz said 303 days ago (September 26th, 2016)
As has been said
this is a good song and the vocal sounds fine to me, but Daugrin says it right with his tips, regards M
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MikeRobinson said 299 days ago (September 30th, 2016)
Yes, this good song needs a re-mix ...
Love the lyric, love the song, but, yes, a re-mix is needed here.   The song itself deserves it.

The “highs,” sitting squarely above the frequency-range of the vocals (and therefore not colliding with them), seem too-loud, while the bass frequencies below the vocal seem too-quiet.   None of the three components seem to really sit together.   None of the three seem to occupy, let alone share, the same sonic space.
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Name: Jay Rivenburgh
Location: Scotia N.Y. U.S.A,
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