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mr_mordenus
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Registered: 06/04/07
Posts: 418
Location: Plasticville,
 
MacJams Haiku
Thursday, January 31 2019 @ 07:46 AM CST

SmokeyVW's near-Haiku post got me to thinking. Anyone got any more inspirations?

Looped it and lost it
CandyAndPolice got mad
And there there's the squirrels!

Back in the day, boy
Challenges were everywhere
It's so quiet now

mike_d
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Registered: 01/22/09
Posts: 309
Location: , of vocation is where I seem to be most of the time
 
Re:MacJams Haiku
Thursday, January 31 2019 @ 10:47 AM CST

From an online poem generator because I am just not that creative (other than inserting certain key words):

Hot every day
An active guitar listens
a creative loop

If I can't fix it, it ain't broke
mr_mordenus
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Re:MacJams Haiku
Thursday, January 31 2019 @ 11:01 AM CST

Vic Holman strumming!
Red Planet Anatidae?
Collaboration!


 
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MotherofMeursault
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Registered: 09/28/08
Posts: 393
Location: , United States
 
Re:MacJams Haiku
Thursday, January 31 2019 @ 03:31 PM CST

There once was a fellow from Blighty
Who ran around clutching his nightie
"Alas and alack,
There will be an impac'
From electing that mand'rin-hued whitey!"



Oh, wait, that's a limerick. Sorry



MotherofMeursault
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Re:MacJams Haiku
Thursday, January 31 2019 @ 03:35 PM CST

Haiku follows a 5-7-5 rhythm:


Once we were free here
But the squirrels felt unsafe
"Simon!, Build the wall!"








MotherofMeursault
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Re:MacJams Haiku
Thursday, January 31 2019 @ 03:37 PM CST


Imperious folk
Cut off new blood from the site.
Now look where we are!









MotherofMeursault
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Re:MacJams Haiku
Thursday, January 31 2019 @ 07:53 PM CST

Quote by: mr_mordenus
SmokeyVW's near-Haiku post got me to thinking. Anyone got any more inspirations?

Back in the day, boy
Challenges were everywhere
It's so quiet now




This is a great haiku.




MotherofMeursault
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Re:MacJams Haiku
Thursday, January 31 2019 @ 07:54 PM CST


Moon over Macjams.
Sepulchral shadows strengthen.
Mike is happy, though.







 
MotherofMeursault
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Re:MacJams Haiku
Thursday, January 31 2019 @ 07:55 PM CST





The correct response
As the site lurches grave-ward?
Invite enemies.