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Purely apple loops from a newcomer to Garageband AND macjams! My first ever track on both. Not claiming any originality here folks but I kinda liked it and wondered if anyone else would.
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Uploaded: Sep 06, 2005 - 08:19:11 PM
Last Updated: Sep 06, 2005 - 06:04:47 PM Last Played: Apr 21, 2019 - 01:53:27 PM
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Monkaton said 5031 days ago (September 7th, 2005)
Don't Let This Be Your Last
What a nice piece of music. The instruments blended very
well and the piece moved and stayed interesting
throughout. A little guitar, a little banjo, nice drums that
didn't get in the way.

The pan flute and synthisizer worked well together
towards the end and I really liked your synth pans. Good
fade out with the synth.

You should be very pleased with what you came up with.
One of the best pieces I've heard you to date. I added it to
my favorites list.
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Attim said 5031 days ago (September 7th, 2005)
Don't Let This Be Your Last
Hey - thanks for your encouraging comments re. my track "1st try". I won't let
it be my last! So glad you liked it.
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Hens Zimmerman said 5031 days ago (September 7th, 2005)
Very good for a first try! I think it would benefit from some more reverb (especially on the flute) to add to the mystery element. If you intend to make this song longer, you could try to add some kind of breakdown halfway where you take away the beats for a while. I think I would also keep the panning a bit more traditional. The song starts out a bit "to the left". While the plucked sounds work especially well in super stereo, I think the drums should be more at the center. But these are just minor comments, and just my opinion. It's a good song, nice choice of instruments and the filtered pad sound is really strong.
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cjhoose said 5031 days ago (September 7th, 2005)
nice first!
lovely relaxing piece. The panning is a little annoying, but
that could just be me. Nice use of the flute. Suddenly I'm
back in Denver at a New Age fair...
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dkonghigh said 5031 days ago (September 7th, 2005)
nicely done
i like this one .. i love how you mixed synths along with
guitars (thats one of my fave things to do with my music too
it just seems nice somehow) and i also like the pipe sound in
it as well... i also like how it has a sort of sad sound about
it .... very nicely done :)
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Reinholt56 said 5030 days ago (September 8th, 2005)
A great first track
The piece gives away you Irish roots. The backing rhythm and sounds evoke Ireland and to me that is good but with the tune it's the icing on the cake.

More please.

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said 5029 days ago (September 8th, 2005)
Great First track
You have a nack for tunage.
Glad to have you aboard.
Look forwarding to hearing you grow.

DeputyDoofy said 5029 days ago (September 9th, 2005)
Very nice...
for a first try. I wish my first try was as good as this. :) Keep the tunes coming.
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Epileptic Gibbon said 5026 days ago (September 12th, 2005)
Great first attempt…
… loop songs don't usually go down too well on this
site but nearly everyone tries to do at least one and
you're receiving some good feedback on yours. And it
is good, particularly the use of flute, though some of
the changes in style/instrumentation felt forced and
awkward, plus I felt the track ran out of steam before
the end. A great first attempt, though, with a strong
sense of your geographical origins coming through.
Keep 'em coming.
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Boundless said 3502 days ago (November 13th, 2009)
what can come up with loops.
This is lovely.

And welcome
to MJ !!!
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Ambient music is a loosely defined musical genre that incorporates elements of a number of different styles - including jazz, electronic music, new age, rock and roll, modern classical music, reggae, traditional, world and even noise.

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