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The Last Time


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drumgodvirtuoso

 Genre: Emo

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A song that I wrote to cope with some heavy break ups. Thanks for listening...
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Lyrics
fourteen hundred hours,
we don't have to be,
I can feel you always,
taking every part of me.

and sunsets speak softly,
right before they bleed,
and I can feel you always,
taking every part of me...

and what will you wait for?
a glimce of hope,
from a flaccid dream?
this inadvertent torture,
when people say,
what they don't mean.

and I swear I heard you scream...

"this is the last time,
this is the last time that I try.
this is the last time,
this is the last time that I'll cry,
this is the last time, here tonight..."

because anymore we say now,
"nothing is to be."
holding on forever,
diverting everything...

and sunsets speak softly,
right before they bleed,
and I can feel you ever,
taking every part of me...

and what will you wait for?
a glimce of hope,
from a flaccid dream?
this inadvertent torture,
when people say,
what they don't mean.

and I swear I heard you scream...

"this is the last time,
this is the last time that I try.
this is the last time,
this is the last time to decide,
this is the last time, here tonight..."

so make it right...
right away...
Song Stats
Hits: 3385
Comments: 7
Fans: 3
Plays: 310
Downloads: 185
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Dec 28, 2005 - 06:01:08 PM
Last Updated: Dec 28, 2005 - 02:32:17 PM Last Played: Jul 27, 2019 - 10:21:14 AM
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Hardware:
MOTU 828, Behringer B-2
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GB2
Comments
said 5038 days ago (December 29th, 2005)
Like Your Playing
Production is clear to my ears. Good melody. Your singing is strong and
emotive.
I was thinking that it might sound more interesting and provide more
contrast to change the vocal production on the "this is the last time" part
- maybe bring them up a little or maybe add some instrument ... electric
guitar amybe? I think that the piano loop you chose works well as a coda
here.
said 5038 days ago (December 29th, 2005)
Like Your Playing
BTW, relationships are difficult enough, but let me say from experience that
being in the navy doesn't help make staying together easier.

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Mungo
mrhappy said 5038 days ago (December 29th, 2005)
pretty good
ya this song is pretty badass great guitar and the singing is ok n ot that great but ya overall its a pretty good song thatll ill prolly download
loyd vader said 5031 days ago (January 5th, 2006)
good stuff
i can here the sincerity in your voice........piano sample is fantastic....you should sing a little motif over it...............maybe make the guitar less harsh sounding to suit the mood......thats my opinion but.
Check out my latest song called breaking through the maze
paxeden said 5011 days ago (January 25th, 2006)
hey...sweet
i'm pretty stoked to hear a vocalist that's unafraid to let it rip over an
acoustic piece like this.

very strong piece... just KEEP doing it.... you will go places.
Check out my latest song called mister
screamalexz said 4907 days ago (May 9th, 2006)
emotional
the guitar is a little harsh and overpowering in the song. i like the vocal style. the rhythem guitar volume is fine, but the vocals are a bit overwelmed by the melody. a good track just needs some volume issues worked out. nice emotion especially near the end.
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
DJ_Veit said 4896 days ago (May 20th, 2006)
dude i love this song
the lyrics are really cool and i really like your singing. id have to
disagree with mungo cuz i didnt really like the piano i thought it was
good with just the guitar and the piano really didnt fit... but i still love
this song good work and make more!
Check out my latest song called Hard Water (Updated)
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Location: Jacksonville FL USA
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born and raised in the midwest. I play guitar, drums, a little bit of bass, and I attempt to sing. I love creating music. It seems to give me that extra thrill. I actually get paid to play music for a living, if you can buy that. Navy Music program ... [see more]

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Genre Info
Emo is a subgenre of hardcore punk music. Use of the term (and which musicians should be so classified) has been the subject of much debate. In its original incarnation, the term emo was used to describe the music of the mid-1980s DC scene and its as

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