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William Yeats


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Moses

 Genre: Acoustic Rock
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This is one of many new submissions that are just fragments that I would like feedback on. Tell me what you think and if there is potential.

The lyrics are from a poem in a poetry collection book that I have. Just an easy way to get some well written lyrics ; )
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Uploaded: Jan 11, 2006 - 08:29:26 PM
Last Updated: Jan 11, 2006 - 09:30:35 PM Last Played: Jan 22, 2018 - 04:04:21 PM
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cleetis562002 said 4722 days ago (January 11th, 2006)
I like this
I really dig the guitar work, amp up that electric and don't skimp on it, put
it out front and let it tell us the story. Some volume tweeks for texture
and post the lyrics and or tweek those as well. I could really get into this
song. I know I'm just a newbie here, but I like what I like.

Thanks for the op to hear your work,
Clee
Check out my latest song called ajourn_e
echoroom said 4718 days ago (January 15th, 2006)
scuzzy
There's definately something here - it starts a little Nirvana-ish, but then opens out into something with a personality of it's own.

There's definately a verse here, and a brudge/chorus.

I like the acoustic (verse) strumming and scuzzy electric underneath, and then the guitar rhythm change.

It sounds like it needs big f-off chords for the chorus.

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