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Parachute


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Moses

 Genre: Acoustic Rock

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lemme know what you think, anything at all
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My world is tumbling
Tumbling down around me
My world is crumbling
crumbling to the ground

No matter how hard
How hard I try
My world is nothing
Nothing without you

You disappear (from my memory)
You fade away

Let it fall down
Fall down
Like a parachute
Just fall down
fall down
Like a parachute

Let my world crash down
With my spirit gone
We all will go
But I didn't want this way

I am told in time
I will join her above
I can't continue on
Without my love

And I know
I know you're watching me
Can you tell?
That I'm am unhappy
I don't know
If I will ever let you go
You left too soon
Song Stats
Hits: 2927
Comments: 17
Fans: 1
Plays: 183
Downloads: 108
Votes: 8
Uploaded: Feb 21, 2006 - 02:57:36 PM
Last Updated: Mar 02, 2006 - 11:31:04 AM Last Played: Nov 09, 2018 - 02:47:22 PM
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Comments
screamalexz said 4681 days ago (February 21st, 2006)
peaceful
i like this, the piano is nice, i think the vocals sort of droan on a little like slurring or something. maybe articulate a little more. like the use of backing vocals.
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Moses said 4681 days ago (February 21st, 2006)
peaceful
roger, i plan on redoing the vocals, in fact, right after i submitted i was
thinking to myself that i should redo them before i submit, but i was in a
hurry, thanks for commenting

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screamalexz said 4681 days ago (February 21st, 2006)
peaceful
hehe that happens to me alot.

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said 4681 days ago (February 21st, 2006)
powerful supplication
Reaching out with this one. Beautiful harmonies. Wonderful vocal
contouring and breathy exudations. You're singing just a bit flat in
places. The light piano part needs more variation and broadening...it
gets too loopy sounding (ostinato). I go away from this piece satisfied.
Moses said 4681 days ago (February 21st, 2006)
powerful supplication
thanks mr. schletty, im going to go back and clean this one up a bit, i think it
needs it, i will mess around with the piano, appreciate the comment!

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said 4681 days ago (February 22nd, 2006)
man...
this is one moody piece of work. But we've probably all been to this place
at one time or another. The lead vocal is really good. But you should hone
the harmonies a bit. The song deserves to be more or less brought to
perfection.
Moses said 4681 days ago (February 22nd, 2006)
man...
yes...i am going to spend some time on it, i think i had a little to much reverb
in spots, glad you enjoyed it! er, in a moody way :)

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jiguma said 4680 days ago (February 22nd, 2006)
lots of potential
This sounds to me like some northern English bands of the mid 70s -
especially the harmonies and the use of strings. I think this song has
lots of potential - I'd be looking at having another crack at the lead vox
though. This is definitely worth spending some time and energy on. I
totally understand being "in a hurry" to upload - I do it all the time.
The drum track suits the song well - is it loops or midi (or do you have
a drummer)? That doubled bass drum hit gets a bit annoying towards
the end - it's fine used subtly, but not every bar. The bass sounds a
bit like an afterthought in places, and could probably be a bit more
dynamic - is it midi or a real bass?
Overall, impressive!
Neil

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Moses said 4680 days ago (February 23rd, 2006)
lots of potential
i did everything on this track with midi, except the vocals of course!
appreciate the comment!

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mandimonkee said 4680 days ago (February 23rd, 2006)
wooof
I like this alot. I love the piano and your voice sounds so moody.
can't wait for the beastiality!
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Moses said 4680 days ago (February 23rd, 2006)
wooof
haha that just sounds soo wrong...thanks!

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Moses said 4680 days ago (February 23rd, 2006)
wooof
haha that just sounds soo wrong...thanks!

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flattstanley said 4673 days ago (March 2nd, 2006)
did the chute open?
I love the piano part. Simple and elegant. The melody is nice but the
backing vocals are a little much. Keep up the good work.

-flattstanley
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flattstanley said 4673 days ago (March 2nd, 2006)
did the chute open?
I love the piano part. Simple and elegant. The melody is nice but the
backing vocals are a little much. Keep up the good work.

-flattstanley
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selters said 4672 days ago (March 3rd, 2006)
Great voice!
I like that hypnotic Piano you are playing! And you sure have a great voice mister Moses! The drums sound good as well, and the strings add a nice little touch without being to overwhelming! Great song!
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sometimesthree said 4672 days ago (March 3rd, 2006)
Nice
Nice verse, love the chrous. Very dynamic transition. Looks like you
plan to rerecord the vocals, good idea. Not that they're bad, but I'll bet
you could improve them.
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Moses said 4672 days ago (March 3rd, 2006)
Nice
yup, i recently took much of the reverb off the backup vocals, and this made
the quality much better in certain parts of the song, but i do plan to redo the
vocals, i can do better, thanks for the comments everyone! i'm glad you
enjoyed the piece

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