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Little Cuts Bleed v2 [TENSE]


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packosmokes

 Genre: Industrial

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Chikoppi and I collaborated on this original song composed by him, sharing vocals and I added some goodies to the musical break. Then, Chikoppi polished it off with some remixing of the tracks. Hope ya like it as much as we do. We had alot of fun collaborating on it.
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Lyrics
Now you say you take away the broken filthy part of me. Every stitch you pull seems to make wider hole. Grit your teeth bite the threads you see. | I can't remember the place, or the time, or the day you wore me down. But if I think back I still savor the taste of the blood and the mud I'll turn around. | Little cuts bleed. I watched you plant the seed. Never felt my hunger slip away. Little cuts bleed. Enough for what you need. Time to turn and bite the mouth that feeds. | Everything you want for me to do denies lust my thrust my energy. Time to place some blame gonna chew through this chain. Run wild run far recapture me. | I know you, know what you like to do, know just how far you dare to reach. Now you'll see, you don't know me. Gonna take what comes, gonna make it come. || Turn away there's nothing left to say, won't pay to play with you again. Can't conquer my soul, its too big to swallow whole. Strip down, let the hunt begin.
Song Stats
Hits: 4816
Comments: 14
Fans: 5
Plays: 315
Downloads: 130
Votes: 12
Uploaded: Jun 18, 2004 - 09:07:39 PM
Last Updated: Jan 23, 2006 - 10:36:39 PM Last Played: Aug 03, 2019 - 01:51:59 PM
Song License
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iMac, Shure m58, ART Tube MP, M-Audio Keystation 49e

Software:
GB 1.1 (all loops and sound sample except for vocals and musical break)
Comments
said 5544 days ago (June 18th, 2004)
Now that's S E P A R A T I O N !
Cool collab, dudes! I can isolate every element without
interference from another! Very well done!

7-7-7-7
penguinsocks said 5544 days ago (June 19th, 2004)
OMG!
THIS IS SO GOOD! soooo much better. wow. pro. way to
go, guys! gimme some more collabs from you! ;)
wooohooo
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gudkarma said 5544 days ago (June 19th, 2004)
pretty good....
i like this. not my type of music really, but it plays well
against me.
i like the beat, and i like the way you did the vocals.

two words up!
: )


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karmicfreak said 5544 days ago (June 19th, 2004)
A small vocal suggestion
I enjoyed overall polish of this piece, and some good
vocals to boot. The style is well done and the vocals are
in tune, and fit the song nicely.

One suggestion: In the first verse, the word "wider" kind of
sticks out - like it's sung with a East-West kind of shape,
so it sounds like "wye-der". If you shaped it a little toward
"wah-der" (but not that extreme - experiment), it would
be less jarring. Of course, it could just be me, the voice
teacher.

Nice job.

KF
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packosmokes said 5544 days ago (June 19th, 2004)
A small vocal suggestion
Oh, how you speak the truth. Here's what was killin' me. "Wah-der" hole
kept sounding like "Water Hole" so I just pushed it out to "Wye-Der"
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TobinMueller said 5543 days ago (June 20th, 2004)
Great concept and follow thru
All the way to the last sound of that blade sliding against
metal, this piece mines a single idea with a very cool
tension between complexity and minimalist sensibilities.
and great lyrics. If I'd change anything it would be to cut
4 or all 8 measures after the "solo" instrumental section,
cuz, for me, it took too long for the singing to come back
in. Great track. 8-7-8-7.
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SaulBey said 5542 days ago (June 21st, 2004)
Good lyrics...Good song...
I feel some NIN in there....and i am a fan of NIN....nice job!
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ronnielong said 5542 days ago (June 21st, 2004)
Sounds good
Alright....keep postin'
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Normal said 5491 days ago (August 11th, 2004)
Very very NIN.
I like this song. But it strikes me as a bit too much of
attempt to sound like The Perfect Drug or Ruiner. Maybe
that's a good thing.

I'm really not sure how to feel about it. It's not very
creative, but it's very good.

I'm confused.
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packosmokes said 5481 days ago (August 21st, 2004)
Very very NIN.
I have to reply to this statement, because it completely reflects how I've
grown to feel about this song myself. Heh! Basically, it's the first
collaboration chikoppi and I did and has loads of room for exploration
and improvement. However, I do like that it's here as it represents our
starting point for Tense... disconnected, a tad messy, but a valiant effort,
heh!
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DeputyDoofy said 5465 days ago (September 5th, 2004)
NIN
Did I mention I'd buy this album? This has a raw, demo NIN sound. I have tons of NIN stuff, both legit and bootleg, and you fit right in. Another well executed tune.
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core said 5457 days ago (September 14th, 2004)
Latency problems
I think this is a great piece. The only thing I noticed right
from the beginning are small latency issues with the cut
off distorted rythm guitar you used for the intro and the
main parts of the song. I think the cut off effect is great,
especially with the softened bell-reverb kind of sound as a
transition. Great contrast! It would need a little bit of
tweaking to work out the timing issues with the cut off
frequencies.
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aclarke said 5295 days ago (February 23rd, 2005)
Revisit
Since you posted the overwhelming Orange I thought it
would be good to start at the beginning of the Tense
project.

This song is good, but what's really impressive is how the
collab partnership you guys have has evolved into
something pretty spectacular. Awesome project here,
guys.
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Char said 2956 days ago (July 20th, 2011)
I haven't heard
anything like this. Great job, guys. Thanks.
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Industrial music is a loose term for a number of different styles of electronic and experimental music. First used in the mid 1970s to describe the then-unique sound of Industrial Records artists, a wide variety of artists and labels have since come

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