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Won't You Please Tell Me


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BranDaMan

 Genre: Dance-Club

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I am not quite finished with the lyrics but I wanted to post what I had. I think the song stands nicely on its own too. In my head i am imagining a female voice singing with this tune. Any thoughts?
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Lyrics
[Verse]
Life is filled with choices
And never ending pathways
Roads that lead to a destination

Have you ever questioned
Where it is you want to be
Some place far away from temptation?

[Chorus] X2
won’t you please tell me now
oh tell me how
to live
won’t you please show me now
oh show me how
to live.

[Verse 2]
Luck won’t last forever
But fate binds you together
Perfectly in tune with every dream

Have you ever wondered
What it is like to feel free,
total harmony with everything?
Song Stats
Hits: 4310
Comments: 20
Fans: 13
Plays: 459
Downloads: 158
Votes: 13
Uploaded: Oct 24, 2006 - 06:56:11 PM
Last Updated: Oct 30, 2006 - 11:46:54 AM Last Played: Mar 13, 2019 - 08:25:31 PM
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Comments
Audiologic said 4627 days ago (October 24th, 2006)
Wonderful
This is awesome, Brandon. I especially love the piano parts near the end. I
would suggest some different synths during the second movement near
the beginning - some sound a lot like a pretty basic clavinet. Other than
that this is wonderful. The beat is perfect, and you manipulated the
melody perfectly before going on to another.

~ Ben
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BranDaMan said 4627 days ago (October 24th, 2006)
thanks
I am so glad to hear that you liked it, Ben. Thanks for taking the time to
listen. I appreciate that very much.
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Audiologic said 4627 days ago (October 25th, 2006)
Whoops
I take back my comments about the clavinet. I first listened to this on
laptop speakers. I see now that it is electric guitar and it sounds great
through headphones.

~ Ben
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Morning Light said 4626 days ago (October 25th, 2006)
I love the energy......
a very beautiful song you have done!!!! The NightBird~
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announcer said 4624 days ago (October 28th, 2006)
NIce theme
nice and simple main theme here that could become really boring but it doesn't because of your song structure. Nice build and good breaks at just the right spot. Good stuff!
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bbop2 said 4623 days ago (October 28th, 2006)
great
loved it!!!
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said 4623 days ago (October 28th, 2006)
Nice melody
It has a nice "hook" to it. It does stand well on it's own, but vocals might help to reinforce the melody even more. Nice tune!
ginz111 said 4623 days ago (October 28th, 2006)
Wow
cool track man!
I'd love to mess with the drum programming on this track.
Carl
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Audiologic said 4623 days ago (October 29th, 2006)
Notes
Brandon - Read your macjams notes... I sent you one several days ago...If you don't mind Carl and I could work up a second version of this with you.

~ Ben
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BenS said 4621 days ago (October 30th, 2006)
Cool Arrangement
Hi Brandaman!

Wow, i think you defined the genre of dance-club new with this track.

Very impressive!

I just like the mix, expecially when the melody of the lead synth comes back at the end.

I like the percussion.

Ben
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said 4621 days ago (October 30th, 2006)
my favorite is the piano that comes in closer to the end
sets off the usual utz utz utz of most dance cool piece of music
spoiledmilk said 4621 days ago (October 30th, 2006)
just what i needed
love those piano parts. Love the song!!!
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Parichayaka said 4618 days ago (November 3rd, 2006)
Candy!
I've listened to a few of your tracks now, and I'm really starting to get into your music. And as they say, Bran is good for you, so here we go! This one's just a really sweet and fun tune and proofs my theory that a talented musician can be good in more than one genre. I'm really looking forward to hearing more from you!
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LightTronics said 4597 days ago (November 24th, 2006)
nice!
Gosh, I love this song! The other day me and WiFiWalrus couldn't get it out of our heads. It has a VERY catchy tune. Keep it up!
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LightTronics said 4461 days ago (April 8th, 2007)
and...
You said you wanted vocals done on this song. I can't get anything out of as far as sending me the file that is supposed to accomidate lyrics. Did you scrap the idea? I would just like to know anything!!! Thanks!

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BranDaMan said 4461 days ago (April 9th, 2007)
hey
sorry i've been busy busy as of late. I still am interested in vocals I just have to make sure I still have the file.
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LightTronics said 4460 days ago (April 9th, 2007)
Very understandable
Let me know when you're ready!

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LightTronics said 4460 days ago (April 9th, 2007)
Very understandable
Let me know when you're ready!

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LightTronics said 4460 days ago (April 9th, 2007)
Very understandable
Let me know when you're ready!

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DJ_Veit said 4574 days ago (December 16th, 2006)
incredible
My man Bran... u rocked this one. Your use of the main motif is just astounding not to mention the actually joy of that lead itself. If this were played in clubs (which it very well could be) i bet the whole place would light up when they heard the beginning of this song. It's one of those that truly has to make you smile the first few times you hear it. I've only made one melody that has made me truly smile when i first listened to it. I bet this one made u smile. Keep doing stuff in this genre my homeslice. If u add some vocals to this piece which i think u should (since it already has the verse chorus structure in it) it would really bring it to the next level. Excellent work, inspirational id say.
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Name: Brandon
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Music has always been a huge part of my life. When I was in high school, I participated in the various forms of band, such as marching band and concert band, where I played the alto saxophone. When my parents bought me my first keyboard to experime... [see more]

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Electronic dance music is a broad set of percussive music genres that largely inherit from 1970s disco music and, to some extent, the experimental pop music of Kraftwerk. Such music was originally borne of and popularized via regional nightclub scene

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