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a work in progress
just started it today sunday feb 18
an answer to my babys mother

some seperations are not self explanatory
input will be good I do have to adjust the timing
on the bridge, I mostly wanted to try it out I will fix it ,
NOT TOO BAD FOR drum loops huh?
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Lyrics
she turned her back again on me today
she wont let nobody love her
a simple pill release is her best friend
it kills the pain thats inside her
an ohh I wish that I could be that friend
how I wish I could find her
I showed her my world and she shook my world on me

how can she ask the world of me
I wasnt born to be her savoir
so many times I tried
so many tears I cried
I ask to take this cup from me

so many people cant let go of life tearing at their soul
they from day to day in pain or fear or crying over their sorrow
all they have to do is let it be and they will get through tomorrow
cause he wont give us anything unjust
yes were born to be free
she never figured out the chioce I`ve made
the love thats inside of me
for four long years I watched her kick and scream
oh how I wish she could see

GIVE IT UP GIVIN IT UP BA BY
LET IT ALL GO LET IT ALL GO GIRL
SET YOURSELF FREE SET YOURSELF FREE DARLIN
YOU GOTA LET GO DONT HOLD ONTO THIS WORLD
CAUSE NOBODY KNOWS NOBODY KNOWS CHI LD
HOW HARD I TRIED HOW HARD I`VE TRIED GIRL

why does she ask the world of me
I wasnt born to be her savior
how many times I tried
how many teard i cried
I ask to take this cup from me
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Comments: 8
Fans: 2
Plays: 167
Downloads: 126
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Feb 18, 2007 - 11:50:20 PM
Last Updated: Feb 19, 2007 - 12:06:50 AM Last Played: Nov 25, 2018 - 10:13:51 PM
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Hardware:
guitar (vantage)
keys (m-audio/ ozone)
phones (sony)
mic (psr dynamic DE-10 Imp.250)
Software:
garage band
Comments
Joe Brady said 4315 days ago (February 19th, 2007)
NICE WORK!
Wow, great work with the guitar and strings. The vocal is engaging from the start. You've really captured the mood of the lyrics with the music. Thanks for entertaining me with your artwork tonight.

Peace to you, Joe
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Livingstone said 4314 days ago (February 19th, 2007)
Thanx
I love input as much as the process
now that I`ve actually listened to it , I hear some adjustments that need to be made, I`m gonna stick with this one for a few weeks and then return it to the collective...........
I do enjoy this way of sharing and getting feedback........

Scott l.

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Doadars Uncle said 4314 days ago (February 19th, 2007)
Hey Scott!
Emotion fits the theme nicely. Great voice. In fact you can bring it out even more!

Great comp.

Doug
Check out my latest song called Don't Leave (remix)
Reinholt56 said 4313 days ago (February 20th, 2007)
I enjoyed listening to this song....
It will be worth working on this some more.

I'll look forward to hearing the version that you will be more happy with.

Take care.

Paul.
Check out my latest song called Dystopian Summer (A Future For The Masses Mix)
said 4293 days ago (March 12th, 2007)
Very cool
The lyrics are realy good. I like all aspects of this song. I see you did this in one day. I think if you just pull the drums together , mabye not use the bongo sound as much. Just my opinion but the potentail here is great. Agian the lyrics are very strong
lavalamp said 4283 days ago (March 23rd, 2007)
Livingstone
I think it's a pretty cool song. Just needs to eq-ed a little. The bass doesn't fit too well with the rest.
Deep lyrics.
Lavalamp
Check out my latest song called The Shallow People
Livingstone said 4093 days ago (September 28th, 2007)
Thanx everyone
I went and deleted the files so I`d have to start from scratch to tweak this one..
lyrics wise I think I got down what I was feeling at that time...
the drums and bass need to be worked together ALOT better
the guitar with the strings have a good feel for the mood of the song
would you beleive I forgot all about this one since like june when I last logged onto this site.(I had a busy summer)
ajnorth said 3978 days ago (January 21st, 2008)
Great song
here. The vocal and lyrics are really good and I like the use of the strings. I do hope you get to progress this!
Adam
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Name: Scott livingston
Location: CANSO Nova Scotia canada
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Traveled all over north america, from key west to northern labrodor newfoundland, from new orleans to chicago and as far west as oklohoma (didnt make it over the rockys) but I got to see lots of performers and always loved the guitar, its the soul of... [see more]

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