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must be a fathers day theme lol cos i wrote this for my old man too lol saying i'm alive despite the hell u put me thru.... chorus vocals r a bit flat but my studio shut down b4 i could fix it so heres what i got anyways, i thin its pretty good still being modest hehe finally got some bass in my music too for all those wanting me to add basslines, thiink it does make a pretty big difference. thanks guys 4 ur advice, will update my other songs with bass too soon
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verse1
break me, hate me,take me, make me nothing like you always do
you make me feel like i'm worthless
in your eyes and view,
i know i don't need you,i don't need you to survive, don't need you in my life,


break me, hate me, take me, make me nothing like u always do,
rape me, break me down, u don't need nothing with u,
i don't need this, yes i don't need u in my life, to survive, i know i'll make soemthing of my life.

ch

i'm alive, i'm alive,
i don't need you in my life,

verse 2

so this is goodbye and i'm sick of
all your god dam lies,
i'm sick of being put down by the words u speak inside my mind,
i'm tired of the lies, i'm tired of the lies, that were spoke to me when i was just a child.
walk away, i'll walk away from all the shit,that you, you
you're so fuken selfish that you don't even care the things that you made me do,
you break me down again, you broke my heart again and i'm so sick and tired i am gonna say goodbye yeah..

ch

i'm alive, i'm alive,
without you by my side i'm alive,
i'm alive,
without you by my side i'm alive,
i'm alive,
without you by my side i'm alive.




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Uploaded: Sep 10, 2007 - 11:37:46 PM
Last Updated: Sep 13, 2007 - 05:14:07 AM Last Played: Jun 03, 2019 - 11:07:32 PM
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Axgrinder said 4299 days ago (September 11th, 2007)
I can relate man!
You did a good job on this. Why I'm the first to comment, I couldn't say? I guess it is still pretty hot off the press! Your production is really improving and the bass really makes a major difference. Kudos my friend! Keep on keepin on,

Alvin
Check out my latest song called Dark Circus
nevermine said 4299 days ago (September 11th, 2007)
hey
hey thanks alvin ;) you must be quick hehe to get to comment first..altho usually u only have to try to beat the other 3 that comment lmao over the next 3 years hahaha.... yes was hot off the press 2 lol only like ten minutes ago.. thanks for ur comments bro', ur a legend ;)

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Morning Light said 4298 days ago (September 12th, 2007)
Top knotch!!!! :D)*
I LOVE HOW YOU OVERCOME THIS HELL ........GLAD YOU ALIVE.......THIS IS A VICTORY SONG!!!!! :D)
Check out my latest song called Oh Blissful Bloom!
nevermine said 4298 days ago (September 12th, 2007)
hey morning!!!
hey thanku soo much... ur comments r always raw and emotion filled. i'm glad i'm alive now too and have an amazing life b4 me because i never gave up and now i also have an amazing partner who i love raving about hehe;) ... thanku again for ur kind words and encouragement...
ciao 4 now :)
geoff

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lavalamp said 4297 days ago (September 13th, 2007)
A little different
Like this, a little different from your other posts.
Love your NRG! Good bass line.
Dude, the first song I did on GB was a song titled "I'm alive", but I never posted. Totally different.
BTW, I think if you add the "explicit" tag, some people will be turned off and won't listen. And I see you add this a lot. It's not a thing that really attracts listeners. I really don't know why. It could be the prude American thing, but who gives a fuck, I thought this was about rock and roll.
Dave
Check out my latest song called The Shallow People
nevermine said 4297 days ago (September 13th, 2007)
hey thanks LL
i will remove my explicit thing lol.... i always thought that but thought i'd try honesty but when that fails try anything u can hey hehe.. well within reason lol in music anyays .. ciao my friend and thanks again 4 ur support!


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