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do not be too harsh on me... it is only my second piece and I am not very proud. Make sure you remember that its a work in progress.
no voice effects on this one.
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Uploaded: Feb 09, 2008 - 12:29:47 PM
Last Updated: Feb 09, 2008 - 12:29:47 PM Last Played: May 31, 2019 - 06:15:33 AM
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Ed Hannifin said 4178 days ago (February 9th, 2008)
guitapick's right...
You've got a gift for melody...

Your voice is very nice on this one. I like that you change the way that you use it across the course of the song... I like the 'la la la la' bits... I like the handclaps, if that's what they are, right at the beginning, and the arpeggiating whatever-it-is at the beginning, too...

You also seem to have a gift for being serious with a sense of humor...

You write a strong lyric...

Suggestions? On my headphones, the vocal could come forward just a little bit, for clarity. Not so far that it hangs above the other tracks, but enough so that I'm not sitting here wishing for posted lyrics. Second suggestion/request: post the lyrics. And, although I'm pretty sure that you want the abrupt ending, I think stopping the music and letting the master fader come down slowly allows for something that sounds like a dramatic full stop but still has some 'air' in it.

Looks like I'll have to check back at dinner to see if there's a third--or a fourth--song up...

Good stuff...

Ed





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guitapick said 4178 days ago (February 9th, 2008)
What Ed said...
really sweet tune

...and:

I play electric guitar and L-O-V-E special effects...as well as the straight sound...(bet ya knew that)...

So: always happy to hear your "real" voice and glad you posted this...but there's a place for the outside stuff, too...

Uh-oh...do I hear my electronic schoolmarm's footsteps...?



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drakonis said 4178 days ago (February 9th, 2008)
I like it...
cute and fresh style. Not only do I enjoy the bouncy backing music idea, but I'm really intrigued by your syncopated singing on this, the timing is what makes this a treat. I agree with Ed (EJH) above that your voice could come up a little in volume here, you have a nice singing voice, so don't be shy to boost it a bit. Also, I can hear noticeable clicks as you cut/edit your vocal parts... as you learn more you will find out how to smooth those out a little more so they are not so noticeable. This has great promise, and I hope you work on it more... sounds cool! Welcome to Macjams!
ttfn,
Drakonis
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Feter said 4178 days ago (February 9th, 2008)
Prince Charm Does Exist
this is charmin ..your vocie ..your song writing
the piano work is marvelous ...all what it need
a bit of work with the mixing and the effects ...
else its charmin up beat song ..curious to hear
how its gonna sound at the final take !
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VicDiesel said 4177 days ago (February 10th, 2008)
This song ought to have a warning label
"Will instantly chase away bad moods"

This is one of the more sunny and cheerful songs I've come across in quite a while. Fun stuff!


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caroline said 4177 days ago (February 10th, 2008)
fresh, clean - woohoo
you have a wonderful voice and this is a sweet and catchy tune -bravo - watch out lily allen!! i look forward to hearing more - thank you
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saymme said 4177 days ago (February 11th, 2008)
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Lalalalla : ) : ) TX for this LOVE IT lol I really do . . Hahhahahahaha ; ) You remind me of Ledebutant...be sure to check her out & THANKYOU
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droop said 4177 days ago (February 11th, 2008)
Very unique
and I like it. Such a happy little thing.
Very nice.
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buckhorn said 4176 days ago (February 11th, 2008)
this
is charming. Certainly nothing to be shameful of, on the contrary. Its your work and your self expression and I found it very appealing. Regards
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thetiler said 4175 days ago (February 12th, 2008)
Cut pic
love the sound of your voice. I am a true sucker for such young sweet sounds. It's almost like you can sing anything and pull it off in a pop direction. You have that natural gift!



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ziti said 4171 days ago (February 16th, 2008)
this so great
and the version droop did id really great.

I heard this one second...and it is just as great....the funny awkward cuts only enhance this my dear....

you are one talented lady. your voice is so in tune, and has a wonderful mature quality that surprises me and thrills me quite a lot.

You seem to be enjoying making music ava, and I hope for my sake, you make alot more. Don't go getting a big head now, and work hard to get better. You have a great gift.

deepest respect and bows

z
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Bob6stringer said 3537 days ago (November 11th, 2009)
Ooh la la!
Even the "no" 52 seconds in and the obvious "canned" drum is PERFECT for your playful lyric and vocal delivery. Lovely tone and great pitch.

HAHA -- before I clicked "Post Comment" I read Ziti's comment and he said what I just said, but better. Plus, he added "My Dear." I can't top that. But wow, I have to hear more. Great to meet you(r music)!
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Bob6stringer said 3537 days ago (November 11th, 2009)
Ooh la la!
Even the "no" 52 seconds in and the obvious "canned" drum is PERFECT for your playful lyric and vocal delivery. Lovely tone and great pitch.

HAHA -- before I clicked "Post Comment" I read Ziti's comment and he said what I just said, but better. Plus, he added "My Dear." I can't top that. But wow, I have to hear more. Great to meet you(r music)!
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