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This song is basically about personal loss. I originally arranged it as a pop tune, but never liked it. Recently however, I completely redid it in a jazz style, (which was a surprise to me believe it or not) but I think it works miles better. Also, since I refused to sing this one myself, SlimGirlFat very kindly offered to lend her vocal talents to the song. I hope you enjoy. Constructive criticism is welcome as always.
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Uploaded: Oct 01, 2004 - 06:06:46 PM
Last Updated: Sep 30, 2004 - 07:03:26 PM Last Played: May 30, 2018 - 11:47:32 AM
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regulus said 5127 days ago (October 1st, 2004)
very very
lovely, senitive and thought provoking. I felt the
emptyness, the tenderness of you both. very refelective
for myself and a multitude of like souls everywhere. no
more words from me, just cheers......... cheers
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koolpaw said 5127 days ago (October 1st, 2004)
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Finaly :D
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Mcboy said 5127 days ago (October 2nd, 2004)
gorgeous....
sound......great lyrics....i thorougly enjoyed this
piece....excellant work u 2!.......
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chikoppi said 5126 days ago (October 2nd, 2004)
Lots to like!
Where to start? The lyric arrangement is very nice, with some interesting phrases and melodies. The piano score is also good, with tasteful progressions and flourishes. In all its terific bit of songwriting.

Slim, this is another excellent vocal performance. This may be the most stripped-down recording I've heard from you in terms of absence of effects/harmonies. Very upfront and "exposed," and very well done.

If I had one suggestion it my be that the song is too consistent. I'd like to hear some more accentuated moments, like when you move into the bridge. That's probably my favorite spot, that transition. It might just be a matter of adding some unexpected chord changes to accentuate the lyrics here and there. Still, great song! (7-8-6-7)
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daphna said 5124 days ago (October 4th, 2004)
Lots to like!
thank you for your feedback chlkoppl! I'll look into those chord changes
you're talking about. Glad you like it.
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_nderscore said 5126 days ago (October 2nd, 2004)
perfect pair
great song you two! the arrangement is top-notch,
excellent, excellent vocals slimgurl! you have come so
very far with your singing, wow. feels like super classy
lounge music.. grand piano, formal gowns, big chrome
microphone.. & roses thrown by the crowd
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said 5125 days ago (October 3rd, 2004)
I echo chikoppi's comments...
Just reread what he said. SGF, you should do more vocals
in this "almost live" setting. You have a whole other
plateau waiting for you. Daphna, well composed song,
with such feeling. The simplicity of this piece comes
across as just right. Taking chikoppi's comments into
account, this can be a great song.
said 5124 days ago (October 4th, 2004)
Great Union...
of MacJammer talent. SGF's voice suits this style so
perfectly. Put me smak dab in the middle of that smoky
piano lounge. Well Done. 8788
TheWireman said 5124 days ago (October 4th, 2004)
Two different songs
They are both great, in their own way.

But the melody is trying to say too much for the tune. It's
beautifully performed - SGF, what can I say - but it's
kinda... too many words, Mozart.

I love the piano part, and when the strings came in I
nearly fainted with pleasure..

But the vocal line is just wrong, I'm afraid. It belongs in a
different song altogether.

Having said that, SGF makes a really good go at it. And I
like her voice without effects. She should do more of it.
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said 5124 days ago (October 5th, 2004)
There and back
There's something in your voice that is wistfully
reminiscent of Petula Clark's "Downtown" and "Sign
of the Times". Those songs, a now this one,
make me sigh and think of my earliest unattainable
heartthrobs. The sign of a good song -- the
evocation of deep feeling.
Ringo said 5124 days ago (October 5th, 2004)
Dusty Springfield
Got a bit of. Can definitely hear the Petula Clark thing too.
The strings in the middle are excellent and the piano is
just plain cool throughout. Well done you two.
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Cantor said 5086 days ago (November 11th, 2004)
your voice
i love the honesty in your voice. totally unadulterated. i'm
glad you don't really use effects on it. is the piano live or
an apple piano? man, do i have pianist envy. i love when
you double your voice. keep 'em coming.
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daphna said 5060 days ago (December 8th, 2004)
your voice
thanks for your comments Cantor. I played the piano part, and another
macjammer - SlimGirlFat - sang it.
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eleveneyes said 5060 days ago (December 7th, 2004)
glad i found you
wonderfully beautiful and expressive. Piano
accompanyment was better than perfect. Vocal melodies
are right one. Especially the faster wordier sections. They
compiment what you're saying and add so much to the
jazzy nature of this piece. The simple orchestration really
sets a nice mood. oh yeah...and the doubled vox came at
the perfect moment. thanks.
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daphna said 5060 days ago (December 8th, 2004)
glad i found you
glad you found ME eleveneyes. I am a HUGE fan of your work - you and I
would have so much fun together....
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thetiler said 4998 days ago (February 7th, 2005)
This a very nice song
Man when ever I see that name "daphna", I always know
I'm getting something special. To me there is a lot of
quality in what you do. Not just of course on this special
tune but all your stuff.
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daphna said 4996 days ago (February 9th, 2005)
This a very nice song
thanks thetiler! Glad you are enjoying. I'm also enjoying your wonderful
guitar.
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