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Lay It On Me


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I wrote this as I'm verging into writing Hip-Hop music.
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Verse 1:
Whatcha doing girl way over there looking at me.
Wont you come way over here and show your anatomy.
See I got this crazy way to show curiosity.
I’m about to break the law and take your virginity.
No I’m not just gonna take it I’m gonna play around.
Start with your lips and tongue and then I’ll work my way on down.
Past your torso and your belly I’m gonna go to town.
How you feeling are you liking the way that this is sounding?

Hook:
Cuz you make me feel alive, and I
I keep getting this feeling inside, now you
You know what to do tonight, so just
Lay it on me, you know its right, come on
Lay it on me, Lay it on me,
Lay it on me, Lay it on me,
Lay it on me, Lay it on me

Verse 2:
Let’s you and me get lost and get lost in each other’s daze
You know you wanna get fixated on that oral phase.
Licking and biting and touching just like those infant days.
Getting twitchy and itchy hoping you’re into three-ways.
We’re speeding off now, where you wanna go? My place, your place?
My place alright well just to warn you I ain’t got much space.
Its gon’ be big and tight just like the presidential race.
I’ll vote for you if you vote for me we can win this race.

Hook:
Cuz you make me feel alive, and I
I keep getting this feeling inside, now you
You know what to do tonight, so just
Lay it on me, you know its right, come on
Lay it on me, Lay it on me,
Lay it on me, Lay it on me,
Lay it on me, Lay it on me

Bridge:

You say everything is going good
Its just going like the way it should
And I’m knowing even though you try
You keep pushing all my love aside
All I ask is for a little love
Maybe even a bit of push and shove
You wanna try to love the way I do?
I try to love the way you wanna do.

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Uploaded: Mar 27, 2008 - 12:58:33 AM
Last Updated: Apr 05, 2008 - 10:37:56 PM Last Played: Jul 10, 2019 - 09:35:37 PM
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Dj French Toast said 4163 days ago (March 27th, 2008)
even tho
this is as suddle as a freight train in a library . the production is good and well thought out .I kinda think the wavy voice thing is gettin played out heavy and is kinda loosin its spice . Also I would classify this as r/b or pop and not hip hop .....these are all just thoughts and not disses ...just my take on the world ...
Check out my latest song called Sweeter no doubt (Beat by Sweet 79)
jasontsotos said 4162 days ago (March 27th, 2008)
Good Job
I listen to the whole sound I really like it I think that you are creating sounds that you feel comfortable with hip hop or r/b I think it was a good job and close to more then just fun keep the work up
Check out my latest song called Let her know
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Name: Mr. Charles
Location: Montgomery AL United States
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Hey everyone my name is Charlie Wedel, but my "stage name" is Mr. Charles. I'm very new to world of writing music, at least commercially. Writing music for me has been very personal and fun. Some people write in journals or diaries, I write songs... [see more]

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Pop music is a music genre that developed from the mid-1950s as a softer alternative to rock 'n' roll and later to rock music. It has a focus on commercial recording, often orientated towards a youth market, usually through the medium of relatively s

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