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If you see Ravyn


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screamalexz

 Genre: Acoustic

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ok i'm really trying not to make a bunch of posts at once. ive waited almost a week lol. actually this recording is old it was recorded the week before i moved back to seattle last summer i wanted to get a demo for some friends at work cuz they wanted to know what i sounded like. i had a long week of 2 hours of sleep for the whole week and after screwing up lots finally just did a live recording of all my songs. i have a love hate relationship with this recording half the time i love it and it makes me emotional the other i think it sounds like crap. i never posted it here because i felt it wasn't worth posting and i was trying not to annoy people with anymore bad recordings. i do feel it's one of my more structured songs though as i put a decent ammount of time into it.
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Lyrics
if you see her tonight
tell her i love her
if you see ravyn
tell her i need her

the stars won't shine anymore
the sky turns black for me
i tried so hard for her
it leaves me in two

but this heart will not forget
what she meant to me
i've tried so many times
i can't let go

if you see her tonight
tell her i love her
if you see ravyn
tell her i need her

if you her tonight
tell her i'm sorry
i swear i'll get it right
under the moon light

my heart still bleeds alone
i've held no one but her
i need her in my arms
to make this right again

i'm sorry for the pain
the way we fell apart
i'm sorry for the love
we had to end

just hold on one more time
we'll get through this tonight
just hold on one more time
i swear i'll get it right

if you see her tonight
tell her i love her
if you see ravyn
tell her i need her
Song Stats
Hits: 2751
Comments: 16
Fans: 7
Plays: 51
Downloads: 164

Uploaded: Apr 11, 2008 - 09:38:42 AM
Last Updated: Apr 11, 2008 - 10:15:32 AM Last Played: Apr 11, 2019 - 08:55:56 PM
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Hardware:
fender accoustic, condensor mic, tone port ux2
Software:
live
Comments
Bob6stringer said 4059 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
Ahh, songwriting basics...
This is a good, honest croon... a "normal" song for my little musical brain, which can get sidetracked by technology... inspires me to get back to songwriting and give hte effects a break.
Check out my latest song called Happy Birthday (Na Na Na Na)
screamalexz said 4059 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
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it always helps to switch things up. i'm more on the part of needing to experiment more again lol. thanks for the listen and comment :)
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
Skean said 4059 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
Heartfelt
As always I like what you are doing my friend.
You've done this in a truthful way that I really like.
I hope the guys at your work like it too.

Take care
---
Kenta
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screamalexz said 4058 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
thanks
thanks that was for ppl at my work a year ago. this is one of the many on my list for a new recording, just finally thought i'd post it here.
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
MarkHolbrook said 4058 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
Thats perfectly ok by me!
You can post as often as you like!!! Your stuff takes the cake dude! Post away!
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screamalexz said 4058 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
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lol thanks. :) as long as one person wants me to post than i suppose it's alright if i keep posting hehe
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
Feter said 4058 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
If you see Ravyn
nice ballad my friend ..good singing as well !!
thnx for sharin !
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screamalexz said 4058 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
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thanks.
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
said 4057 days ago (April 13th, 2008)
Again..
nice little jem. You REALLY need to start adding all the backing instruments or at least get some folks here to give you a hand. I think you write very well and your tunes deserve to be takin' to the next level.

Well done Chance.


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screamalexz said 4057 days ago (April 13th, 2008)
thanks
thanks. i know i really need to get decent recordings, i've been trying just seems when i try i always make stupid mistakes or something. recording has been a long battle and ofcourse trying to keep my motivation and drive.
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
dajama said 4056 days ago (April 13th, 2008)
Great stuff
Very touching and heartfelt performance. Your voice carries tremendous feeling and expressiveness, and you sing this beautifully. This is a perfect example of a song that needs nothing else - there is so much power in your vocal. Very impressive. Nicely done. Peace.
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screamalexz said 4056 days ago (April 13th, 2008)
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thank you. i definitely felt the song while i was singing it. i think this is one i will leave with just guitar.
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
that80sboy said 4056 days ago (April 14th, 2008)
this is very nice!
i can hear the sadness in your vocal....nice job on this one!
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screamalexz said 4056 days ago (April 14th, 2008)
thank you
hey thanks. :) glad you enjoyed it.
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
woofer3 said 4047 days ago (April 23rd, 2008)
I like this -
because it's a real song, just you against the elements.

The song it'self puts me very much in mind of some of Elvis Costello's work and the vocal delivery is not unlike our Elvis as well. Very touching and appealing piece. Thanks.

John
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screamalexz said 4047 days ago (April 23rd, 2008)
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thanks i'm glad you enjoyed it. i think this weekend i shall give it the honor of a decent recording.
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
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Chance Motta was born in Seattle, Wa in 1988 and began playing any instrument he could find at the age of 13. Starting off with a taste for heavy and fast music such as bands like Greenday, Rancid, Anti-Flag, and other rock bands Chance saved up ... [see more]

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