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Ok, i have to apologize for uploading yet another unfinished song, but i just havn't had time to complete it and wanted to get this 'taster version' up!
It's quite simple, and i'm not to good at writing lyrics so i undrstand their a little unimaginative, however, i liked the production side of it and have yet to put one of my own vocals up here, so i thought 'sod it' and did it. Hope you like!
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Uploaded: May 13, 2008 - 03:23:37 PM
Last Updated: May 13, 2008 - 03:23:37 PM Last Played: Oct 08, 2018 - 04:59:26 PM
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Feter said 3933 days ago (May 13th, 2008)
WOW ...man this is a classic folk song .. yoour
singing so special ..you got a very straight folk
sound that the signature of your song here .very
nice arrangment ..the cello and the harmonica ..
all so so real ..Hats of to you for such song ..
despite the mixing its certainly all so wonderfull !!

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mowguy3 said 3933 days ago (May 13th, 2008)
Think the lyrics are just fine . Your vocals stand on there own as well. The backing music sounds great. Nice job liked it alot.
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Mckenzie said 3933 days ago (May 13th, 2008)
thanks so much for your encouraging words, i'm so pleased you heard some sort of folky-element in my voice - that puts a BIG smile on my face. Appreciate you popping by!

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lengold said 3933 days ago (May 13th, 2008)
Really enjoyable
gentle song. Love the cello and your voice sounds sounds spot on.

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jgurner said 3933 days ago (May 13th, 2008)
This is great
You've done a wonderful job both musically and lyrically. It's a very sweet song and your vocals are spot on. The production is also very clear. Each part just really stands out. An excellent all around tune. Thanks for sharing.
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Peter Bauckham said 3933 days ago (May 13th, 2008)
Sounds pretty good to me - I like your voice and the mix is good - everything is well separated - so it sounds nice and clear.

Thanks for sharing
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J.A.Stewart said 3933 days ago (May 13th, 2008)
You have a good singing voice... very warm and mature-sounding for an 18-year-old... and you use it to good effect in this song.

The arrangement is put together nicely and the somewhat different combination of cello and harmonica end up working surprisingly well.

Since you're still fiddling with it, you may want to consider some kind of bridge that offers some contrast to the rest of the tune.

But all in all, this sounds very good. ;)

--- Joe
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thetiler said 3933 days ago (May 13th, 2008)
Like these kind of words
This really seems very heartfelt.l

Like how this has an Elton John feel, nice cool sound.
This has nice mainstream sound.

It is kind of one that you envision giving it to a star and them making you rich.

Just make sure you get as much profit as you can! :)

Enjoyed ! Really!
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harisahn said 3932 days ago (May 15th, 2008)
sounds nice...
very pleasant tune. Enjoyed listening. Fully realized production. Very thoughtful and wonderful.

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gail60 said 3931 days ago (May 15th, 2008)
well well...
In my humble opinion...Kelly needs to wake up and smell the coffee!! She needs to give you another chance. LOL... Seriously, you are very talented. You sing very well and the lyrics were catchy enough to keep it interesting. Finished or not, this is a really good song.
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Lightman- said 3929 days ago (May 17th, 2008)
What a good melody.... And your vocals fits good to it..... Gives inspirations.... Thanks for that..... I like the sound on the acoustic guitar.... Great....
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apb said 3920 days ago (May 26th, 2008)
Great song ..

.. really good all round, loved all the wee parts .. but the focus on the guitar and vocals .. the latter I think should really come up a bit in the mix .. you have a good voice, no need to hide it a little.
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Remark80 said 3881 days ago (July 5th, 2008)
Nice chord progressions. Nice singing and I like the build up. Thanks
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Lennon714 said 3835 days ago (August 19th, 2008)
Wonderful progression. Other than it ending sooner than I'd like it to, it's perfect. You're one of the brilliant ones here. Thanks for posting.
Alannah said 3823 days ago (August 31st, 2008)
Another ....
.. nice relaxing listen for me as I work my way through your tunes .... I started at the most recent and am working my way through them ..... all good stuff!
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