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I'm Sorry


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HalwayToNowhere

 Genre: Ballad
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This is a song I wrote a few weeks ago, and recently recorded. Its not a perfect version and I can't sing at all, but I think it makes a decent demo. Please forgive my terrible vocals.
The instrumentals included my Yamaha Keyboard and an Acoustic guitar, along with synth drums from the keyboard. The mix could have been better, I haven't mastered recording chords on the acoustic yet but its alright. I'm very interested in what people perceive as the message behind this song, and how they interpret its meaning.
Any constructive criticism on improvement or execution is appreciated.
Thanks for listening, Enjoy.
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Lyrics
I know there's nothing more
I've seen it all before
We'll never be again
So this is how it ends
I'm sorry

I wish I had a reason to be angry
I wish I had a reason to be strong
I wish I had a choice but I'm demanded
You were right and I was wrong

I'm sorry

You say there's nothing more
Like you've seen it all before
But Someday we'll be again
This can't be how it ends
I'm sorry
Don't be Sorry

I may not have a reason to be angry
It may not all be right, but its not wrong
I may not have a choice but I'm still happy
You were right and I wrong
Song Stats
Hits: 2514
Comments: 11
Fans: 6
Plays: 55
Downloads: 112
Votes: 4
Uploaded: May 14, 2008 - 09:45:47 PM
Last Updated: May 14, 2008 - 09:45:47 PM Last Played: Mar 02, 2017 - 03:30:15 AM
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Hardware:
Yamaha Keyboard, Acoustic Guitar, MXL Condenser Microphone, Tube Preamplifier
Software:
Magix Movie Edit pro 10, Fruity loops
Comments
Feter said 3785 days ago (May 14th, 2008)
I'm Sorry
thats a very nice work my friend ..your singin
just great ...you need a bass for all that ..
its terrific song wellfdone and thnx for sharin !!!
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egobandit said 3782 days ago (May 17th, 2008)
excellent
well rounded and played with percision. I like the chord changes and the struming guitar that comes in. Enjoyed it Im glad I stumbled across your page!
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kassia said 3782 days ago (May 17th, 2008)
I'm Sorry
This is a great little tune. Definitely worth keeping and fleshing out. It's a beautiful melody. Drums a little too loud - like you said, needs a remix, add some sweet harmonies in there. But it's a really nice sound man, nice chord choices.
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said 3780 days ago (May 19th, 2008)
Great!
Great song, fine guitar playing, great piano line and a very fine job done here. You're a very great addition to this site, welcome to MJ brother... Great start!

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gail60 said 3780 days ago (May 19th, 2008)
nice song
I enjoyed this. You did a great job writing and performing it. Simple and sincere! If I had a complaint it would only be that I don't think the drums and cymbals sounded quite right. I think the piano all alone on this one would work best. But hey, what do I know? Thanks for sharing this with us!

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Robert Rayner said 3774 days ago (May 26th, 2008)
I agree
with the above comments, but your voice sounds fine to me (a darn sight better than mine)
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Char said 3739 days ago (June 29th, 2008)
Your melody,
The story behind the lyrics and your voice are all very sweet. I would fiddle around with the lyrics a bit.
Perhaps, start out with what your partner has said, first and end with your hope that something could be salvaged.
How about: Wish I had a choice but I was prevented. (?)
I think this could be a longer and very romantic song of loss and hopeful expectation. Thank you.
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HalwayToNowhere said 3738 days ago (June 30th, 2008)
Yo
Thanks for the comments everybody, I appreciate the feedback. I found it interesting how Char interpreted the song to be a sortof romantic confession, which I didn't really intend it to be. Still, I can easily see how it can be perceived that way. Actually I really thank you for your honesty here, its the important insight I like to hear that helps me develop a song more.
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asconejar said 3716 days ago (July 22nd, 2008)
:)
In reality people make decisions in their life, sorry is maybe a polite way of saying, I don't want you anymore for I can't give too much of my self. Please respect my decision. Very nicely written, I like the melody and emotion behind the song.
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HalwayToNowhere said 3714 days ago (July 24th, 2008)
Wow
Thats a very beautiful interpretation, I see this song can really be read from many angles. Thank you very much for your input on this, I really appreciate it!
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Toveco said 2862 days ago (November 23rd, 2010)
This is Good!
You dont have to be sorry for your voice! it's Good! Lovely song,
very well made
good sound, good lyric, good played and good singing!
Beautiful.

Tom/
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Name: Andrew D'Amico
Location: Bethel Park PA United States
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I attend Point Park University where I major in Cinematography. I am 19 years old. My favorite bands are Aerosmith, Queen, The Beatles, and Def Leppard. I attempt to record music. I play piano, Acoustic/Electric Guitar and some bass. I took piano le... [see more]

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A ballad is a story in a song, usually a narrative song or poem. It is a rhythmic saga of a past affair, which may be heroic, romantic or satirical, political (affected by the previous three types mentioned, refers to either glorifying the exploits o

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