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This is an old song... Recorded back in 2003.... It's about my illnes (physical), and about the unfair universe...
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Into the sky, there's so much pain around
Nothing can help, even a healthy sound
I look at myself and think
I haven't got the nerve
It's all unfair in the mighty universe

Outside my door is always joy and fun
Sometimes i go thinking that i'm the only one
I look at myself and cry
Is it really what i deserve
It's all unfair in the mighty universe

I look at the world and think
I haven't got the nerve
It's all unfair in the mighty universe
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Uploaded: Jul 25, 2008 - 03:28:46 PM
Last Updated: Jul 25, 2008 - 03:28:46 PM Last Played: Sep 01, 2016 - 02:56:43 PM
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12parsecs said 3523 days ago (July 25th, 2008)
nice, classic pop progression. great bg vocals. agreed, life is unfair more often than not. but despite that, you wrote a great song. thanks for sharing!
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Skean said 3522 days ago (July 25th, 2008)
Yes that is so true
I agree with you every word in this is heart-feeling too me.
And as always very nice production my friend.. I love it.
Thx for this one:D

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Lennon714 said 3522 days ago (July 25th, 2008)
the universe
this is a great moody track. I love the progression, especially when it goes to that minor. This sounds a lot like early-mid 70's John Lennon - which is a fantastic thing. But that being said, it made me want to hear more Ringo style fills. I'm not sure if it's needed or if the song reminds me so much of a Lennon song I expect to hear it. Either way it's a great tune and well done!
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Kori Arashi said 3522 days ago (July 26th, 2008)
Nice But Keep Moving :)
I really enjoy your vocals here. It has a really nice tone and it makes the song flow quite well. However the topic it's on no one said life was fair and it never is for anyone. Some are more fortunate than others while others are unlucky. But you can't let that stop you my friend. You got to keep moving forward. You have a lot of musical talent here- don't let things stop you :)
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VicDiesel said 3522 days ago (July 26th, 2008)
70s ballad
This is good solid work. Well written.

From the point where the drums come in I have little problem with the arrangement, but I don't like the beginning. You have that (let's call it a) guitar, and the strings, and later the vocals. And they all play more or less the same, except that the guitar doesn't sustain. Personally I would start with the guitar and then add the string, and later the vocals. Right now they really duplicate each other without much reason. In addition to a gradual build-up I would also try to make the parts more independent. Let them do chord changes at different times, or a have different rhythmic identities.
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lengold said 3521 days ago (July 27th, 2008)
This is
a beautiful song.

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Name: Jakob Lysgaard
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