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Die(electric #2)


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screamalexz

 Genre: Acoustic
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just posted this but when i converted it to mp3 realized that the vocals were way too low so i ended up just re recording the whole thing. now i think the instrumental may be a titch too low lol. thoughts? i'm not the best for mixing. i'm deleting the one i just posted so my page doesn't fill up with tons of the same song.

don't want to post the same song thousand times in one day hehe there is a version of this on my myspace with a second vocal part and the instrumentation a little louder to give it a darker quiet feel during the verses myspace.com/chancemotta now i just wish i had violin lol and i am thinking of doing some sounds in the background like wind and stuff make it a bit darker.
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Lyrics
if i can't see does it matter at all
the world just passes by
if i don't feel would it matter at all
you stab me in the heart

for every night lost
that never felt so right
i've fallen to far
to find what i have lost

one day you'll see
it all comes crashing down
when you hear that song again
an old familiar sound

die die my darling
because my heart's so cold
die die my darling
because i love you so

we'll never make it now
upon this earth we walk u
so come and take my hand
where devil's sigh and angel's die

die die my darling
and take me with you
die die my darling
because i miss you

i'll die because i miss you
die because i need you
never breath my heart again
tell me what you wanted

this midnight crisis never fails
to bring me down again
the clock ticks slowly by
another spark to loneliness
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Uploaded: Aug 13, 2008 - 12:01:45 PM
Last Updated: Aug 13, 2008 - 03:37:32 PM Last Played: Apr 06, 2019 - 09:03:52 PM
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Jim Bouchard said 3989 days ago (August 13th, 2008)
don't delete the old one!
Leave it up for comparison! at least for a while. Actually, do whatever you like, it's cool. I liked the other version and I thought I left a comment on it, because I didn't think the vocal was too soft, but when I checked it wasn't there. In the verses it was under the guitar, but for some reason I liked that, and it came up in the choruses. This is pretty good too though. Would be nice with some harmonies singing along, sort of like what michael2 does. Doubling up the vocals can really make things sound smooth and spooky in a way. You've really improved a lot over the years! Emo? yes, but not bad at all!
Check out my latest song called Big Yawn (Apogee One mic demo)
screamalexz said 3989 days ago (August 13th, 2008)
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mm thanks for the comment yes i was thinking of doubling the vocals some during some parts. i deleted the old because i dont want to end up with 50 versions of this one song lol i already have 2 others on here.
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
said 3989 days ago (August 13th, 2008)
How many times
Chance my mate has that poor girl died on this song hahaaa must be the umpteenth time. I have listened to know chance at least.
Sounds alright. I liked em all .


Peace Dee
screamalexz said 3989 days ago (August 13th, 2008)
lol
and its still not finished lol. probably be re recording every song i write as long as i live lol.
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
E-Frame Wrecker said 3986 days ago (August 16th, 2008)
not bad
Hi I liked the song. I'd suggest to keep moving forward writing new songs and then coming back to the older ones. You can really get lost on the production of a song.

One suggestion I have is to work on timing. One these acoustic songs I'll often put a drum part in them as a guide to the tempo while I record the guitars.I can't seem to keep proper time with just a click track. I get a yo-yo effect with the tempo. I noticed that here in the beginning.

Thanks for sharing.
Check out my latest song called Being With You
screamalexz said 3986 days ago (August 17th, 2008)
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i actually did it live on purpose to keep a more loose feel to the song. thanks for the comment :)
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
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